| Reviews for Pokémon: The Parallel Challenger |
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   CureCaligraphy chapter 3 . 12/30/2018 Red! I said don't be rude... Then again, Ash has that effect on people... |
| CureCaligraphy chapter 2 . 12/30/2018 Ash, meet Red. Red, don't be rude. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/7/2018 Geez.. Red talks a lot |
| Shawn chapter 16 . 2/22/2018 Awesome fic loved it plz complete it I want to read it all plz complete it thanks for a awesome fic I loved it |
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/23/2017 This fic is shit. Here's why: Poliwag was the first pokemon Red ever had, not pikachu. Using deus ex machina(or whatever it's called) to give Ash advantage in the battle is a cop out. You could have made this story better by making it more realistic; by letting ash get beaten in the battle. Like a sword being forge the constant "beatings" will make him strong, kinda like a mentorship thing. None of Ash's old pokemon trained consistenlty and as intensely as Red's pokemon. They're just placed on prof Oak's research lab, god knows what they're doing?! Red trained his pokemon everyday on the top of a mountain that is constantly getting hit by a snowstorm. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/15/2017 Ughh! This is complete torture! Write the last chapter man! |
| SilverFanged chapter 16 . 5/24/2016 Please finish that last chapter |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/8/2016 When the next chapter coming out |
| SkyRage chapter 9 . 8/2/2015 So much bullshit. "Only sleep 3 seconds" my ass. Give me a break. Couldn't come up with something better? |
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/12/2015 WOOOHOOO! this was intense, if there is a next chapter I can't wait to see it. |
| h0b1z chapter 16 . 6/16/2015 This is torture! Who won? |
| Jeffrey Z chapter 14 . 5/25/2015 I would use quick instead of fast. |
| Jeffrey Z chapter 1 . 5/24/2015 A very suspenseful intro. My expectations are high... |
| The Truth of Words chapter 7 . 4/13/2015 I see ash cant win through real battling so he must resort to type advantage... |
| Bulbreon chapter 16 . 4/11/2015 Well since there is only one more chapter it'd be REALLY awesome if you'd just update. It's been what, like a year since this has been updated? I just reread this from like last year or so and remembered how much I liked it, then I realized, it's STILL not finished. Now, please, if you're reading this, UPDATE PLEASE! Seriously this is one of the best plots for a non shipping story, well not major shipping story I guess since there was like that one little moment there but you know what I mean. It's so good and you NEED to finish it, it is a MUST! Please please please, for the sake of human kind, finish this masterpiece. |
