| Reviews for Origin |
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  Hamwallet chapter 10 . 4/7 Yeah right asshole |
 corinafoust chapter 10 . 3/2 please update soon a very good story |
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/8/2019 this is a really great concept and I love how you made it flow ! I love it ! |
| KuriKashi chapter 3 . 8/14/2018 Oh damn! Madara knows about her skills now. |
| daliapv.perez chapter 5 . 7/10/2018 Bien. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2018 dammit update please |
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/9/2018 please update |
| Sarima11 chapter 10 . 1/9/2018 Updateeee! Pls |
| daliapv.perez chapter 8 . 9/29/2017 I like |
| daliapv.perez chapter 9 . 9/4/2017 I like |
| Lemonlover chapter 10 . 6/11/2017 I guess you're really taking yourtime writing that lemon huh (like even years) hahah damn this lemon gotta be written in such detail that its only waiting years to ripe to perfection. JK even though you stopped writing I enjoyed reading your story the last chapter could pretty much be accepted as the ending as the pairing sailed away ~ |
| Tobiramamara chapter 10 . 5/5/2017 Awwww lemon! |
| Ked chapter 10 . 4/11/2017 Please please please please update this story! This is an amazing story please ! |
| NadeshcoYukimara chapter 10 . 3/17/2017 pleaseeeeee the next chapter XD |
| Kgirl17 chapter 10 . 1/14/2017 This story is addicting and well written! I hope you one day update it or have a sequel! Keep up the great work! |
