Nice! Other than a few spelling mistakes here and there, it was great! I didn't you know you wrote Gintama too. Came here from Hetalia. Poor Hijikata though.

Si émouvant ! :')

Honestly...I really have to ask you why you hate Hijikata so much to write a fic bashing him like this.

Hijikata does like to insult others, but hie insult never goes further than the person himself, joking someone else deserves to die is too far out of charater for Hijikata or anyone in the Shinsengumi because they had faced too many deathes everyday to make jokes like that. Anyone in Gintama may threat or joke to kill a person, but that is just it, they will never go far as insulting the person's other family members or people related because every one of them came from a broken family and knows how words can hurt.

Every time I read this story I end crying (it's propably the 8 times than I am crying with this now) , I hope than you will continuing or please mark it as complete or I will be hoping for noting XD

Amazing...just amazing.

Aha, nice. Love it, even if it is a temporary trunce. Poor Gin-chan, but I'll forever love you!

I loved it! Is it complete? If not, please continue!

You are telling me that takasugi, hijikata, and katsura were together in a room without nothing exploding, no handcuffs. For this story one must disregard the fact that takasugi and katsura are joi patriots still and that hijikata has no handcuffs or desire to jail them. However at the end i do not exactly understand, they gather and have a temporary truce (where and how), i smell a sequel.

This story make me cry
I truly like her

Stupid Hijikata and his blabbering mouth. But good story nonetheless!