Keep writing

Love him being in D/s and being the Dominant one. Would love to read more.

Omg please keep going with this!

love it another soon please!

Really hope you finish this...very hot!

Hello dear.

first of all I love this concept-its a side of will I'd like to see more of.

I don't usually take time to review, just hope for the best. But in this case I want to actively encourage more chapters. :3

Write more this is really good!

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cool put more chapters plz long time of waiting

Cool. I've never seen a fic like this. To be continued?

its interesting cant wait 2 read more

Oh, yes! I liked it very very much! Please write more. I'd love to see more along this story line, it's ... I don't know how to describe it. LOL. It's intriguing and could be suspenseful (waiting for his commands) it's definitely exciting. Great work. I'd love to see the smut come in this type of story. Please continue.

On another note (I hate to say anything negative, but please note that it comes from a good place) there were a couple of typos that distracted me a bit from the story. Example: "Rachel by dear but your clothes back on..." should have been "Rachel my dear put your clothes back on...". You just might want to make sure that you double check it before it goes out or use a beta. Although I have to say, regardless, I love Love LOVED it. ;)

CONTINUE ;)

continue! I like it :)