["No, I AM scared!" She retorted, glaring at me.] "She" should be lowercase.

[This spunky red head coordinator won the Sinnoh Grand Festival and earned the title of Top Coordinator just recently.] "redhead" is one word.

["So, have you gotten used to life here?" She began.] "She" should be lowercase.

[Dawn and Candcie both noticed this.] You misspelled "Candice".

[He was wearing a green button up shirt with an orange tie and black pressed pants.] There should be a hyphen in "button-up".

[Though the blush seemed to be a little caked on, the cherry lip gloss and maroon eye liner was great.] "eyeliner" is one word.

[After sputtering out, she let go, still grinning like a mad man.] "madman" is one word.

[But there was no gap, so I was stuck trying to weave through the non-existent space.] There shouldn't be a hyphen in "nonexistent".

[Instead, I ended up knocking over a camera man, causing his microphone to go straight into a reporter's head.] "cameraman" is one word.

[The reporter, after rubbing her head, yelled at her camera man.] Same as above.

["Zoey, here!" I yelled over the audience, and seeing that I had what she needed, bent down to take t out of my hand.] "t" should be "it".

Aw… this was adorable. I've always loved Shootsdownshipping even though it's crack. The whole idea behind this was great. And I love the title. When I first saw it, it confused me at first, but after I actually read it, I find it so fitting. It's by far the best title for any fic I've ever found on this site so far. :D

I felt like Zoey was OOC in this, though, because I've always imagined her to be the type to remain calm almost all the time and not get angry at anyone (except Paul), even if her angriness is playful. Lol, but that might be just me and the fact that it's been so long since I've watched an episode with Zoey in it. :P

But seriously, the writing was great and well put. I really liked it when Zoey was trying on all those dresses; you captured her tomboyish nature very well. This was a really good read overall! I really enjoyed it! :)

Awwwww so cutesie! Shootsdownshipping is one of my faves!

XDD Hilarious, how Barry somehow got mixed into all this.

Oh wow! This is amazing! Sorry I couldn't review earlier!

I love how you spent so much time and effort into making it so long... that proves you were dedicated, and I'm even more happy so that you posted the rules on your profile!

Thank you so much!

WOW. Just, WOW. ShootDownShipping written in this order is really great. Keep up the good work!

Danica_Paramour

Aw! :) ShootDownShipping may be crack, but it's actually really sweet! Nice job! :)

-Charmy