This... this is... THIS IS SO GODDAMN BEAUTIFUL! My freaking god are you a poet? This was so AMAZINGLY beautiful I just... i think I cried a bit... this was so freaking amazing please never stop writing!

THAT was pretty cute.

Absolutely amazing. I'm speechless.

That was so beautiful

I'm gonna cry, that ws beautiful T.T

to be honest that was the most beautiful thing i have ever heard! BRAVO!

O.o WOW

Oh look, you made my heart do happy things.

THAT WAS SO GOOD YOU WRITE BETTER THAN ALOT OF AUTHORS OF BOOKS I READ IM NOT KIDDING

There is such a beautiful rhythm to this, and the descriptions, though they could be perceived as vague, are so incredibly vivid. The contrast between Soul and Maka, and the way you fit them together is so beautiful. The gradual build up of their relationship was perfect, and the visuals are stunning. I'm so incredibly impressed with this. You have such an amazing knack for words and making them flow together in such a lovely way. Thank you so much for writing this and choosing to share it with the world.

Oh my god I ADORE your writing style, this is beautiful! Good work!

That was so beautiful ; n ;
the eloquence, I can't deal with it

I just stumbled on this little ficlet and oh my god the writing was done beautifully

wow. this story was amazing. it was super descriptive and it was like a vocab/grammar porno. I loved it. It was amazing.

Absolutely lovely! This was extremely well-written. I loved the symmetry you used.