Oh man.
Listening to Sally's Song...heh.
Fun effects man.

This was so great, sure the canon doesn't support this but it's just to great to deny.

Super duper cute!
I love the way you've written this. It was very nice to read and there were barely any errors.
The characters' personalities were spot on, too.
I really like how you took into account that Dirk had never met other people, also. It added a nice depth.
Superb job! This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. :)

This left me breathless. I didn't want the story to end, I wanted it to just keep going! Dirk's feelings and worry and everything is done perfectly. His quirks and Jane's control, gosh. If I dont stop here I'll just keep going. The point is, managing all that is certainly a feat, especially in only one chapter. But you did just ruin all other DirkJane fics so thanks for that. JK, I love you for this omg.

Oh my goodness! The only word I can think of to describe this fic is 'beautiful'! It worked really well with canon and put it in a new perspective. Thanks for such a beauty of a story!

This was just so utterly amazing, and perfect, and just /right/. After reading, I just needed a moment to be in bliss. You are so talented, and I look forward to more of your writing!

I love you so much for writing this, I would give you a cat.
The way you captured Dirk was amazing! I love how you grasped and the explained how growin up on an island all alone can affect a person. Then how being social after living 16 years on an island can be the hardest thing ever. And I would gush about the DirkJane parts but that would lead to the rest of this review being keyboard smashing.

This was the most amazing beautiful Jane/Dirk fanfic I have ever read. I love it to peices!

claps well done!

God this passage is so beautiful I can't read any other stories in this tag cause they cannot compete.

This is a wonderful story. No lie. I felt so many emotions coming from all the words you used, not a single one wasted in prose and effort. Kudos to you, and I hope to see more.

What purely genius and masterful writing.

This would have to be one of my favorite one-chap fics. I used to think Jane was a boring character, but the way you portray her makes her seem, well, majestic. definitely adding to favorites.

Oh wow.
I was seriously tearing up half way through.
It's so well written, and it's so cute.
And the way you described Dirk and his emotions as robotic was GLORIOUS.
I love you oh my god I'm so happy right now.

Hello! Sorry that I don't have an account, but I wanted to say that this was incredibly well-written! I ship DirkJane, too.. hopefully that doesn't make me biased. Haha.