Welp. Good luck.

Followed weblink recommendation here from favorites site & really this has fallen flat. Same lame stuff written in many other stories but bit more romance, the inevitable Drarry pairing & yawn I'm so bored already! Very long winded speeches too continuous & not enough action. Did make an effort but have to quit.
Rewrite with a non fluffy brained beta would help perhaps?

hours of hate for drarry
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"AARRGHH!" Malfoy woke with a start, sweat covering his whole body.
A dream - no a fucking nightmare! - like he'd never had before!
Fancying Potter! SHAGGING POTTER! He needed to owl his mother and organise a mind healer to meet him in Hogsmead this coming weekend. Fortunately it was only two days, but still.
He briefly considered if some potion or a substance had been slipped to him at dinner? Unlikely as the house elves would never allow it. He knew better than to ask Snape for any assistance. Chalk it up to experience and NEVER tell his father was best way to go.

Despite multiple sessions with various mind healers, Malfoy could not throw off the recurring dreams until end of school year.
He'd ended up a nervous wreak as even Pomfrey's dreamless sleep potions refused to work. They were vivid, detailed, varied and oh so bloody realistic!
He was listless, hardly slept and failed half his end of year exams. It had taken most of his father's influence, calling in multiple favours and a fifty thousand galleon contribution to the schools muggleborn education fund to keep him with his year mates. Having to repeat a year would mean so much loss of face, as to be fatal in Slytherin political circles.
That rage in his father's face - and him snapping his cane in half - when stood in headmaster's office as Dumbledore exceeding politely suggested that muggle fund donation, would never leave him. IF this continued next year, he'd find himself at Durmstrang before christmas.

As it was he expected extreme punishments from father during two month summer holidays. And of course Lucius Malfoy's punishments were nothing to laugh at. While nowhere near as pain inducing or sadistic as his aunt's famous rages, the prospect of facing those subtle paternal tortures made his blood run cold.
It was ALL POTTER'S FAULT! But the Gryffindor had ignored him since before that first dream. He couldn't imagine that stinking scarhead keeping silent if he had been involved? Mudblood bitch Granger wouldn't break the rules like that and Weasel was too stupid to accomplish anything so subtle.

Draco's problems disappeared during July and August at Malfoy Manor, but returned with avengeance after arriving back at Hogwarts. He was packed off to the Scandinavian school before beginning of October. Lack of rest, disorientation and nerves caused him to vomit on arrival by portkey. That had been quite an ominous start to his new placement at the institute. It didn't get terribly better.

It took a further eight months to become free of those accursed dreams of being with Potter, kissing Potter, marrying Potter, HAVING POTTER'S BABIES and afterwards he never worked out where these perverse visions came from?
He had a very mediocre academic career at Durmstrang's and left England for good after he graduated. The humiliation of bumping into any of his former Hogwart's schoolmates coloring his choice. His going bald at twenty didn't help matters - he put that down to stress of his father being chucked in Azkban and losing more than three quarters of Malfoy fortune to fines. Living in Austria he found some success as an exotic potions and powders trader. He never had any desire to marry, as any sexual contact with others made him picture Potter's face as they were in throws of passion. Those green eyes filled with potent lust! Eeep! And of course those visions were worse when he COULDN'T see Potter's face.

Voldemort's feeble attempt to return in 2041 was crushed by The Order of the Eternal Phoenix and Dumbledore's Legacy muggleborn group's Horcrux neutralizers. Harry Potter's soul fragment having been removed years earlier at St. Mungo's under supervision of Hermione Granger-Weasley and her daughter Rose Longbottom.
Harry frying the so called Dark Lord with a Muggle thermal lance was a final insult to Tom. As he turned it on Riddle's limbless body, it was rumoured the screams could be heard from outside the Shrieking Shack to other side of Hogwarts.

Draco Malfoy passed away from a particularly nasty strain of dragon pox in his ninety third year. Bald, wrinkled, bent and with sunken features, his remains could've been mistaken for a very tall house elf. Only two extremely distant relatives attended his funeral, and then that was mainly to see if he'd left any gold. It was not to be, as what little he owned was eaten up by providing him with medical care in those last few years.

(Fred and George's replacement of Draco's haircream with one of their more potent products was never detected. They smirked for weeks when the blonde ferret unknowingly packed up two full tubs when he left for Durmstrang!
It was only revealed in 2136 at reading of the late Fred's will. Their nine hundred relatives and friends filling the Brighton & Hove Quidditch stadium pissed themselves laughing for almost an hour! Harry had to be taken to New St. Mungo's for the strain on his elderly chest, but recovered in a couple of days. For generations to come wizards, witch's & even muggles would go out of their way to taunt a large portrait of Lucius and his son, which still hung in a quite corner of the Ministry atrium. Icing on cake of this would often be portrait Draco hurling insults back or breaking down in hysterical sobbing - which incited portrait Lucius to smack him across the back of the head!)

...why would Harry be on the Gryffindor team? Like, isn't that basically telling him that Tigerlily's not a real House and he has to pick another one. And if he is gonna play for Gryffindor, shouldn't he play for Hufflepuff the year after and then Slytherin the year after that?

Disagree about the movies topic. There are some really good anime ones that are movies and 'The How to Train Your Dragon' series but as they're after there time period... I can kind of understand that. The one about the puppet, but I can't spell his name is the best. Along with Bugs life. They were my favourites as a child. I liked lion king too. Though I don't like them as much now. Ja ne.
Get them to watch something else like Doctor Who... That will be funny to see. And on Halloween they dress up like the characters and cause scenes from the show with magic. Cause their smart and can make it happen.
I wonder why no one has though of creating a common space were any house can meet up.
Also like how you have made it so they can use technology in the magical world. One other question... Do they use pens?
Ja ne.
Marathon reading this.

the story is a huge rush, like a story line rather than a properly written story. The idea of the fifth house is interesting. I’m just not used to this much of OOC. I mean Snape opening up to Hermione just for her asking? Snape saying “you guys”? Also I understand managing so many characters is not easy, but jumping from one to another’s view at such a pace is frustrating and makes the characters sounds plain

I won’t lie, as much as I love Blaise I probably would’ve done the exact same thing as Dray

Their closeness is so adorable and heartwarming
I’ve always wanted something like that

you go Narcissa! You fucking badass, I love this Narcissa, in fact, I just love this whole story

Why do the Pureblood Wizards, and of the wizards actually, have phones/landlines? I mean, I don't mind too much nor am I completely bothered, but is there a particular reason or does it just not matter?

Found this story by chance and I am glad I did. I love it all. Your ships are great too! I like the changes you made as well. Write on. On the way to check the second part. :3

hold the phone...how the fuck did harry get the diary? oh shit this is gonna get real

congratulations you have just turned snape into one of the most likeable characters. I freaking adore this

This has to be my favourite chapter. Brought a tear or 2 to my eye!

Did I miss where Neville was in the huddle?