This was amazing! I love how harsh and unrelenting you are with the dark themes, it's so realistic. And Bane's character is so spot on. You have to update soon!

Very good! I like how you divided the chapter into the hapenings in the cells. The way cell 3 is conspicuously empty is great, it's almost as though the entire cell is a character of its own. Great first chapter!

I love this Jonathan. He's crazy, but a lovable crazy. Please update. I can't wait to read more.

Love to see some more chapters from you because I am still very much enjoying your story. Hope you haven't forgotten about us and your characters and hope you are doing all right. :D

It is sad there aren't that many Crane and Bane fanfic. They are really my favorites I like how this doesn't have anything romance like between Crane and Bane. Good job on this. I am looking forward to more. :)

Really love this story! Lovely develupment of the characters and the depth you put in. Fantastic story! :D

Bane climbing "on the backs of lesser men"... Very poetic. The rebirth of the Scarecrow was also very symbolic, I loved it. It will be very interesting to see what the'll do next.

I adore this transformation each of them go through. The idea of Johnny now in the mirror was cool. I don't mind the wait for a spectacular new chapter! Continue.
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Aww man the suspense is really building! Update again soon!

This story is amazing, both the scenes from The Pit and The Fields gave me chills.

I love the identity of the last inmate (totally did not expect that) and your writing is so good. It's really fascinating, and the dialogue is just wonderful.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

WOAH that was intensely creepy! And yay, the Joker, I loooovveee him he's such a great character. But if he was like Bane and Scarecrow, I feel like nothing really could break him, because he so doesn't care about anything.

Gaaaaaah! Evil! Brilliant and evil! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I loved the Joker's cameo. Poor Crane.
Just a tiny side note, I believe his name would be spelled, "Jonny", not "Johnny," but that's up to your discretion really.

Your prose is just amazing; I can't think of any other way to describe it. The style, the figurative language... it's just so good.
I can't wait to see how Bane gets out of the pit...

NICE! Update again soon!

Joker was portrayed very well! I do find the animosity between joker and johnathan quite interesting in the way you have scripted it. Come back soon
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