I really would you would write more longer stories like this one! Fantastic, dramatic, and hilarious at ask the right points. I would LOVE a sequel, maybe with a bit more of Jim's past (and so we can see more of protective Jim). But wonderful nonetheless and well done!

I do like this, but wished for a tiny bit more at the end, such as Jim sharing his past, Bones sharing his loss with Jim. Loved Clay! He was hilarious! Nice to have a story also where Joss and Clay aren't jerks.

Oh God do I want a sequel to this story! What about Jim's past? Did you make a story (sequel please let there be a sequel!) about that and how it might affect him and his boyfriends? Wished more was covered on that :( , wanted to hear more about that aspect of Jim. Will search your list of stories but don't think I saw one that could be a sequel of this. Will double-check, just in case. On that note, would you mind making a sequel to this story? Hard to find good long stories about the relationship we all love between the three idiots, especially stories that make people desperately want a sequel.

Please make a small sequel...4 chapters minimum?

About their life together...please? I love what you did with these guys! Oh! Leonard should mention his book! And they can talk about Vulcan and stuff! Funny and sweet as hell! _

Absolute masterpiece. i was completely enthralled until the end. And then I was still enthralled.

...dear... dog... and whiskey...
I... never would have seen that coming at all.

need more

need more

I want Pike to be a good guy :3 But I'll take anything I can get

WoW! Great story! Love it!

(P.S. I figure I'd give you the heads up: Chapter 19 is missing and in it's place is a repeat of chapter is just killing me because chap.19 seem as if it'd be awesome! )

Oh, Dear, Lord, Whiskey.
What a pair of chapters to miss and then get to read back to back. I was mad that I didn't have time to read 19 earlier this week 'cause of a fellowship I'm doing, but this worked out even better!
Also, you have impeccable character real-ness in your stories. I must figure out how you have done this.

Too bad Spock already has a hold on Leonard's hand so he can't run. Kind of wanted to see the chase scene. but great job on the story!

on ur mark, get set... GO!

Not another cliffhanger! You are too evil.
An evil genius I might even say.

am... would... is happiness the right emotion for the end of this chapter?