hello borath. i was reading the story in the app of Fanfiction, but there seems to be a failure in chapters 18/19. They can't be read in the app. wonderful history! best wishes

Love! BTW, it's the "Eye of Horus" on Yami's forehead, not "eye or Ra," you really did write that. Eye of Ra is on the Puzzle. I know my Egyptology.

Love! The storytelling was cute and I really like the kids. Just wondering what's going on with the "twins". Hope to read more from you, this will happen a *lot* because I'm on summer vacation and have *so* much free time. Yay! I'll read the sequel somewhere and will also read Submision and all that. BTW I read Grave and liked.

Love! I'm sorry, it's 10:30 p.m. over hear and I think I'm killing brain cells without the aid of alcohol, but with the aid of no sleep. I'm 13 so I've never had a drink before. I'm staying awake as a 7th grade graduation celebration. Ah, screw me.

I love the story! The plot is moving nicely and Bakura's 'assistance' was cute and funny. The communications between Ryou and Bakura are developed in a strong way. I want to finish this Ra-damned, praise-filled review to read. I *am* wondering what happened to Tetsou as per the Theif King's remark. I hope for survival of Seto and Atem's family and I'm curious to learn the 'twins' names.

Love!

I like Tetsou's appearance, but this was a pain with the way things went. Want to read more!

No! You can't do this! I was loving the story, but I'm crying now. Why the fuck did you have to do this!?

Please don't kill the twins!

Love and hate, I wanted the Pharaoh to have this work out and the end was a bit hard to read.

I clicked post unintentionally. I meant to add that I get pissed when people have guys make fun of the differences in girls. This obviously doesn't bother Borath.

Love! I said it when I was Kris Ichijouchi and I'll say it again, I wish I could explain all of my emotions telepathically, but I can't. So I just like Kiara's new ability and am feeling pity for poor Bakura. Those of you who hate him, I hate you. I went red during Joey's antics, mostly finding them funny, but I get *extremely*

I meant to write that I liked the end

I love the story and all of Bakura. (that sounded *way* weirder than it should have) I also want to kill the girls and the ending. Although I *did* face-palm at Yami's stupidity.

Love! I'm so enjoying the fix and am sorry I haven't done any review work for a bit. I like the intensity, although I do feel that you are (please don't kill me) afraid to show true sexual material, just bump up the rating.