Reviews for Equilibrium in Vertigo
gennsis chapter 4 . 11/7/2017
This is simply a masterpiece. I've always thought that Satsuki is one of the few people extremely affected by the separation of the GoM (other than Tetsuya), and it's a delight to read a story that describes her feelings and thoughts in such a vivid manner. I can relate to this tbh. Sometimes, the innocence we had as kids are lost as we become hardened with apathy, and it's so scary to see people whom you once called a friend change and grow distant from you. Change is inevitable, and Satsuki was scared of that change, but I think she was able to accept it at the end of the day and learned to move on, which shows massive growth of her character. She had made a difference, no matter how small it might be. The way she fussed over Daiki and embraced his flaws (even though she was complaining throughout it all), and the way Daiki was all gruff and rough, yet he still needed her all the same- All of these make their interactions especially genuine and enjoyable to read. Thank you for writing this :D
Nostalgic Beauty chapter 4 . 12/2/2014
I had my doubts, but this turned out to be a really good slice-of-life story. It was really well written, and I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!
Laziness Incarna chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
Really enjoyed this! There's something very realistic about how Aomine and Momoi are figuring out this teenager thing. Well done.
UngratefulNin chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
The relationship you wrote about those two felt just right, nothing out of character
K chapter 4 . 5/20/2014
Thank you for sharing this story! UvU I loved it!

Keep on writing!
thecrazyones chapter 4 . 4/17/2014
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, Frog-kun!

Your depiction of the Aomine/Momoi interaction is really good in here. It helped me to make sense of their relationship for another fic of mine. So, thanks a lot !

I'm glad you find their relationship charming, since it enabled you to produce this ! :D
Shiroi Ichigo-chan chapter 4 . 12/19/2013
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! That was so beautiful and sweet and omfg! *dies*
Your story was so good, I loved every bit of it. The end of last chapter and the beginning of this chapter were so intense I almost exploded. Like, seriously! Both Aomine and Satsuki were so in character and I loved how you portrayed them as kids. You're awesome and you should feel awesome.

Keep writing!

-Shiroi Ichigo
scythe's serenade chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
Love the story, but this chapter's a bit sad. Thank you!
CherryPop0120 chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
Very charming story. :D
Akrasian chapter 4 . 5/21/2013
This made me cry.

Thanks for the read.
Gureshingure chapter 4 . 4/16/2013
your writing is superb! Please do make the sequel(?) please! XD
And I hope there would be some AoMomo romance in it, xD
sdd chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
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shadowluck chapter 4 . 12/22/2012
(late review is late! it's been a while since I faved this story)

I think this is an absolutely charming story and the character dynamics are beautifully told. I really do love your Momoi, and the way her relationship with Aomine is portrayed here is wonderful, really - messy, in the way life and childhood friendships are, but still absolutely true. There are lots of little moments here that are absolutely perfect.
Tabibito-san chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
Momoi, Kuroko, Aomine, their characterization are just so spot on, the best I've seen. The writing is beautiful, everything flows naturally. Seriously when it comes to fics like this I can't find much words to say. Great work.
xxIcyAngelxx chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
Oh my gosh :o

This is beautiful. Beyond words, this is exactly what I wanted to read in a fanfic when it came to Aomine/Satsuki. You captured them perfectly in words, their inner struggle, how close they really are to predict each other and wow the building romance over the year(s). Oh Daiki w

I loved it! I hope you write more
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