Update!

i like how this book is going its really good and very intersting, please update soon so i can see if the others get their thunder spirits.

please update soon as this it a good book and i would like to see what happens next. and how it ends when you get there.

its a really good book hope you update soon and hope you are feeling better from being unwell.

please post the next chapter as im looking forward to seeing how this book goes

this chapter was really good i will probably read the book again from the beginning because then i can get up to here again hope you update soon.

Please update soon as it’s a good fanfic and I’d like to see how this book ends.

Please update soon coz I wanna see what happens and if they find their thunder spirits. And how this book is gonna continue. Hope you update soon.

man, after all this i'm surprised izumi isn't pregnant yet...

Don't u mean Bokomon the one giving Koichi the lecture, and not Neemon?

Finally you updated it. I sure enjoyed it. Hope the next chapter will be updated soon

When will the story be updated? I wonder if there will be a chance that Takuya and Izumi will go for a naked swim?

How about Takuya and Izumi go for a naked swim and have sex there. It'll be hot and wet

im liking this fanfic just wondering when the next chapter is going to be.

Get smexy with it