This story is woefully under-reviewed. It is so well written with interesting language and characters, mystery, and a complex plot.

I read this once before, early on, LoVed it then, can't put it down again. Excited...

review for the next chapter (also applies to the last chapter)...

Wow, this ending is magnificent. Very tidy and sophisticated wrap up. And oh, so fulfilling to read.

Whoa ... what a chapter. Excellent. And sad sad sad.

I love the juxtaposition of mother/raider Renee. It puts Bella in such an awkward spot - stuck between her principles and her base feelings of abandonment, loss, and MOTHER. Edward is such a rock for her, an honest rock. Love it all.

Wow! That's quite an opening.

I read this quite a while ago and recently stumbled upon it again. It's beautifully written and o, how i love me some sci-fi. I forgot how much I love these interlaced characters. It's been so long, I can't remember the ending, so can't wait to see how things turn out-ha!

Hello! I’m here per fryrebyrd’s rec. Great start. Can’t wait to read more. This fic has me excited!

This was an amazing story! Thank you!

I just finished reading this fic and came here to thank anda congratulate you. it really stands out among other twilight fanfics. This save me during the current lockdown. absolutely wonderful how you deppen into Rosalie and Carlisle; the triangle between Rosalie, Bella and Jessica. How the relationship between Bella and Edward wasnt the epicenter of it all. Really wonderful. Thank you. you are an amazing writter

What a beautiful and sad story! Thank you so very much! Poor Emmybear! Sniff sniff!

I really loved it so very different I love that
Thank you

I’ve just read this straight through, I couldn’t put it down. What an amazing story. Thank you for these characters, for sharing them with us. I know I’m soooo late to the party but I’m so thankful to have read this story. I loved your Jessica and Rosalie, both are often badly maligned in fanfic - thank you for them. :)

Oh nooooooo!

I’m thinking Tom may have left some kind of listening device, a bug, in the trailer. I think he’s undercover, or working both sides. I wouldn’t trust him at all.