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Reader chapter 6 . 11/17/2012 Read authors note for machines of the wateland WHAT DO YOU MEAN IR LEAVING THIS STORY AS IT IS YOU CAN'T I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IF NOT THEN MARK THIS STORY AS COMPLETE AND WRITE A SEQUEL TO IT PLEASE |
MetalMunk chapter 1 . 8/31/2012 I changed my name because I'm the only MetalMunk around here, BABIES! I HAVE to draw them X3 I watched a cow giving birth (shudders) I am forever scarred |
Zootopian Fulf chapter 6 . 8/27/2012 A flying fox and I think it would be realy cool if you added a wolverine or a black wolf in you story but they would be nice if you want them to be anywho update soon |
OmniGawker chapter 6 . 8/26/2012 Well i have to say: its crowded in that household. Now i wonser if this'll turn into a problem in the future |
jforever764 chapter 6 . 8/22/2012 OK HOLA! OK REALLY REALLY EXCITED TO SEE WHEN MY OC COMES IN (I have an idea when she will but i don't want to be confident about it just in case) ok my favorite type of bat is indeed a vampire bat |
WordNerb93 chapter 6 . 8/21/2012 Hey, I managed to have some time on my phone, so I thought I'd read and review. Well, you certainly didn't have either of the new bats waste any time. Neat idea for Cindy's diet! As for the favorite species of bat, I'd say Myotis vivesi wins. If you don't remember, it's the fish-eating bat! |
AxB love artist chapter 5 . 8/20/2012 Great story :D |
Zootopian Fulf chapter 5 . 8/19/2012 Oh yeah I have but don't realy want to talk about it but anywho great chapter update soon |
WordNerb93 chapter 5 . 8/19/2012 Well, another bat enters. Nice choice of species! With all the variety, it makes me wonder if a vampire bat will show up. Yes, I've been oblivious to a lot of things, usually things involving my sisters or female friends. |
Jforever764 chapter 4 . 8/12/2012 Can u please please please use my OC as Alvin and Brittanys new daughter if they have one? I would mean SOO much! Anyway my favorite sweet is cookie dough! I love it I once went to Costco and was gonna buy a huge pack of cookie dough until my parents were like "no" |
Zootopian Fulf chapter 4 . 8/12/2012 Awsome keep em comin that was great and funny |
WordNerb93 chapter 4 . 8/11/2012 Very nice. These three all have their faults, huh? Glad you made them more realistic! (And I'm talking about talking chipmunks being realistic...) My favorite cookie are my family's homemade choate chip cookies! Although, anything my dad and youngest sister make is up there! |
Jforever764 chapter 3 . 8/9/2012 Oh yes just so you know I'm perfectly happy If my OC the daughter of Brittany and Alvin just say that she's different so she looks different I guess? |
Jforever764 chapter 3 . 8/9/2012 Ok jforever764 is the name of my actual YouTube account! So the most awko taco thing that ever happened to me was when I ran into the guys bathroom because i really needed to use the bathroom and my crush was in there using the bathroom than the most awkward part of it all was when I went to class I was still blushing so everyone was asking me why I was blushing Ok so if you need an OC Character I got one for you (this is for if u want to make another munk preggo in this preferrable Jeanette and Simon) but u can use it for other purposes Name: Scout (Seville if she's a Seville) or O'Malley Gender: Female Eye Color: Stormy Green eyes with light brown flecks (she would be the daughter of Simon if possible and she would not wear glasses) Fur: Dark Brown with chestnutish brown highlights Height: Around Simons Hair: Dark brown Emo Bangs with a high ponytail Outfit: Black Leather Jacket with Union Jack Shirt underneath Personality: Adventurious,Brave,Bold, Pranskter,Smart,Rebilious,Tough,Stroung,Will do anything for family,A Jerk Sometimes,can be understanding and sensitive, Sporty, and Musical Music: She has a great singing voice |
Zootopian Fulf chapter 3 . 8/9/2012 Walking in on my parents doin the wild thing anyhoo keep it going please update soon |