Reviews for John 117: A New Beginning
Green ranger99 chapter 8 . 10/20/2019
i like it so far. hope you continue it
symion chapter 8 . 2/21/2018
Really hoping you handle John and Parisa better than the other two stories that have them as adults.
Sparta49 chapter 8 . 7/7/2016
Update please.
Shihan rahmi chapter 8 . 2/24/2016
so cool I hope you'll continue the story soon Bro.
BloodshotJW chapter 8 . 1/24/2016
Plz update soon! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2014
Wow your one of the few people that noted the Cheif is MCPON, but Cheif doesn't...
SquatZ chapter 6 . 12/7/2014
IT'S LIGHTESH RED!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/2/2014
Update have John reveal to parisa and keep his promise
Blacksword 1 chapter 8 . 11/1/2013
Cool story so far the whole black fog thing was amazeing awsome looking forward to the rest peace out from reach
thelexy chapter 8 . 10/29/2013
Nice!
CommanderSP chapter 8 . 10/27/2013
Very good chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
.kiss your left hand 2. Say the name of the person u like 3. Close your hand 4. Say the name of a weekday5. Say your name 6. Open your hand 7. Paste this in 15 comments and on the day you picked your love will tell you they like you and ask you out if you don't do it within an hour of reading this you will have 1 year bad luck. ...
Guest chapter 7 . 4/11/2013
Y U NO UPDATE? :( Seriously, this story's awesome. Update... please?
Guest chapter 7 . 4/10/2013
great story soo far cant wait for more. read it kind ove fast but its looks good all around
AlwaysBetOnVoid chapter 7 . 2/28/2013
Needs an update please!
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