cool plot and awesome setting! ;D

beautifully done!

This is all?,i hoped to be more,anyway its a good story,i loved it :)

A thing of beauty.

Wow, holy cow. Pretty good.

I. Am. Captivated.

Are you still working on this? Please tell me you are! I love it so much!

You are an awesome writer. I'm getting a lot of Ice and Fire vibes, seeing a lot of Lannister action to come. I've never thought of Nolan's Gotham being set in medieval times but it actually makes sense when you think about it. It works. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

is this abandoned? :C

Hey! I really enjoyed all 12 chapters in little over an hour. I really REALLY enjoyed how emotionally vulnerable you made Bane. You really put a lot of thought into this. I DISlike how Bane confessed to John too late. But since thats part of the plot and we were kinda made to enjoy the John/Bane moments, we were influenced to dislike that part. I also love the Selina/Talia bits they were rad. I particularly liked that part as we were put into the perspective of John so we were limited to what we could see/hear/know. Super well written.

Also i wanted to let you know that chapter 12 was repeated... And that 7 times out of 10, you forgot to add a space after italicizing something which is an easy mistake to make and can be easily be ignored by readers. But for the pickier bunch out there... So yeah.

Keep on writing! Hope you update soon

Somehow I see the happy ending slipping farther and farther away :(
Beautiful story!

Oh Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooo John, why would you do that?! D:
poor Bane :C

AHH! This is so amazing! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Loving it but god the lovers drama sadly its remaining me of Days of our Lives (only know that because my mother watching every day -_-') Damn you John if you kiss Bruce after this is grrr. anyways can't wait to see what you come up with next.

I am in love with this ff. I love the emotions that Bane and Blake feel for each other. So different yet similar. Great work! :)