Oh, I'm sad it's over. I really liked your story! And these are rare stories about this couple. Especially so well written. I am relieved that it gives a new chance to their potential story. I hope you write more. :)

I’ve read this a million times and each time it’s better than I thought, it’s so wonderful. I just melt at the intellectual banter. Thank you for such amazing astounding character writing and plot.

This story has been an absolutely amazing story To read. I loved it, the fact that you were able to take something like the Alabasta arc and make such a wonderful variation of it like this is astonishing. This has just the right amount of plot, romance, characters, and uniqueness to be one of my favorite fan fictions. I will definitely favorite both you and the story and I hope that you keep making wonderfull stories like this. . 3

This was brilliant! I loved the ending and all that tension build up!

I love it! Please let there be a sequel or something. This is the best Crocodile story I have found and trust me it is hard to find a good one. This was an awesome story.

hiiii!
i just finished reading it and i reall loved it so mucch tha i can't get myself over it!
im looking forward to your next stories.
since your good on writing about somewhat cold/evil/mysterious male protagonist,
i suggest you should write about eustass kid/smoker/doflamingo fanfic.
thank you for the nice story!
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I absolutely loved this story I can only hope for either as equal or more stories from you since no one else seems to like the vivi x crocodile pairing so keep on being awesome and writing wonderful stories

beautiful

Woah!3
But...I hope it's not what I think it is...
That was the last chapter?!\3

This is pretty much one of the only fics I can read over and over again without becoming bored.. It's so good!

Please do the next chapter, when I saw you had updated it the last time I squealed a bit. I need more!

Oh. My. God.
:'o
And you had to stop here?! D: urghhh\3

Btw, wouldn't it be better to put the fic under the M category? c:

Thanks for the amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next!3

I'm so happy you updated! :) there are so few storys of these two and I really like them. Interessting chapter, i'm looking forwared to the next one. Good luck to you! :)

Even thou I'm not a fan of croco with any character (except my oc xD) this is SOOO GOOOD! The plot, the chemistry between those two, it's so well written! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon **
And thank you for writing this amazing fanfic. 3

(I was to lazy to log in, forgive me)
Oh my god! You updated! It was amazing, I'm so happy
I can't wait to read the rest. :)

Yesssssssssss! I'm so glad you finally posted this chapter. I thought you had given up on it :c I can't wait to see how things will end up between those two!