Oh me oh my...

This was entertaining. I admit, however, this is not quite up to par with your writing, but still fun to read. The lack of actual paragraph breaks-indentations or line breaks or SOMETHING-made it really hard for me to read. And there were some mistakes in grammar and some typos. Buuuut otherwise, still entertaining and erotic.

Oh, and I forgot to tell you in the last chapter, you wrote "Widows XP" instead of "Windows XP". That is all.

I liked this much more than I expected to. As always. Does it hurt to be so perfect? That almost turned into a bad "fell from heaven" pick-up line. Good thing I stopped myself.

Okay, so here's how I'm feeling with this ship. I feel like I could make it my own headcanon that sometimes Sherlock and Lestrade used to have crazy sex, but then Sherlock met John and then they fell in love and the end. So I can see the sexual side of this ship, but the emotional... I dunno, I have difficulty with it. They're kinda like my brOTP, it'd be hard for me to imagine them TOGETHER... but sex is good. Friends can have wild sex on desks. ESPECIALLY ANDERSON'S.

Okay, onto the next chapter then.

Oh dear. Oh dear! Molly is a naughty, naughty girl in this fic! Voyerism? Hahaha! What a hot mess. Great descriptive writing! I like. Cheers.

Oh my god that was fricking HOT!

Fan-fucking-tastic. Seriously, you are blowing me away. Never thought to even think of something that wasn't Johnlock before, but this was incredibly hot. I'm starting to think you are just such an amazing writer you could make any pairing freaking amazing lol. I do hope you've seen the latest Star Trek Into Darkness movie? Not to be a bother but I would love to read your take on Benedict Cumberbatch as a sexy badass superhuman! Wink wink ;)

oh my gods! sherlylocks i love you! :D i love this pairing!

Fantastic!
omg so hot i almost passed out, thanks! XD
Lol at last two sentences!

That's a deal !

Can't really say anything that hasn't already been said. While I am firmly in the John/Sherlock camp, there really is something to be said about this pairing. And as you said, Rupert Graves is a heck of a man, so to pair the two of them... Drools. Thank you for making my night. No angst, no crap, just a bit of dirty fun. I especially love the bit about Anderson's desk, fantastic touch. I heartily approve :)

Fantastic piece Ladies. thanks you so much for sharing.

That was probably the porniest thing I've ever read, and I loved it. Holy crap.

I'm so glad u continued with this story, it's so good, and super hot in both chapters. Also the ending is hilarious!
Great job, keep writing :)

I didn't know this was here LOL! My name over here is LadiElayne though, but it's ok :-)

You know Johnlock is my OTP, but I can get on board with this. I'm the one always asking for penetration, and, as usual, you did not disappoint. Damned good porn. I'll never get sick of it.