Betrayal from a passing acquaintance feels like a pinch to the heart. Betrayal from a friend is more of a punch to the gut. Betrayal from family...feels like you're being flayed in flames and taken apart while alive. It's the worst kind of betrayal EVER. It's the worst because if you're a rational type of person, you'd end up questioning where you made a mistake. You'd question what you've done wrong. It's the worst because you would suddenly realize that the people you swore to protect could willingly turn their backs on you.

DANG. OH MY ... WOW. good job, I think you just out-angsted every other fic on this site

WHY DO YOU MADE ME SUFFER LIKE THIS!? -sobs-

I REALLY hate it when you do that. Just LEAVE it. Its soooooo annoying. Here you have a wonderful story line, that so FAR has been writen exceptionally, and en it just wnss, leaving me, the reader, on a horrible, awful cliffhanger. I Hate it. But i LOVE the story.

Oh wow...my God... I was expecting something along the lines of them finding Rin and having a happy-dandy time and stuff, with rainbows and pretty flowers.

Wasn't expecting Rin to kick the bucket tho. Oh jeez. Nice story though, descriptive with no grammatical errors that I saw.

What next? This is incomplete. And I'm a fan of suspense and cliffhangers at the end, but this is just poorly executed. Good story otherwise. May ask for the premise myself. ~Nox

wooooooaaaah okay there, back it up, fucking back the fuck-ing hell up. WHAT!?

HOW COULD YOU YUKIO I HOPE YOU FEEL VERY GUILTY TOO!

OH COME ON, WRITE MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEE PLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE
PLZ

You could've at least told us if he was dead or alive...:[ :-x

OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD

CONTINUE

PLEEEEEEASE X.X

YA CAN'T DOO THUS TA MEEEH! /cries a river/

That's so unfair! Please! Just one more chapter?

Rin? Sweety!? RIN! Fuck naw... *cries* I hope Rin isnt dead. THERE BETTER BE ANOTHER CHAPPIE SOON OR THERE'LL BE HELL TO PAY!

JESUS NO

Ahhhhh! Thats not finished! Plz! More!