Reviews for Whirlpool and a Vampire(s)
The-4uditor chapter 1 . 10/21/2019
This thing must be quarantined
demonzone2571 chapter 4 . 6/18/2019
please continue this story
Borello chapter 4 . 1/31/2019
damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter.
blade8790 chapter 4 . 1/27/2019
finish the storie please
bloodline 69 chapter 4 . 10/30/2018
update the story man four years please
Fanficlover2017 chapter 4 . 10/28/2018
When are you going to update? I think a break of four years is long enough don't you? Update soon!
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 5/17/2018
Cool story continue please.
RICECUMXOXO chapter 3 . 2/17/2018
Bro, just STOP bro. Your stories are FUCKING TRASH. You always overpower "Naruto" and make him this cringy ass character that only 9 year olds would think is cool. This fanfic is disgusting. Your writing is disgusting. How could anyone look at this and say "Wow this is so logical and reasonable and consistent!"? MOKA says that she HATES HUMANS and NO ONE CARES. TSUKUNE says that he doesn't like monsters and he is BEATEN UP for it, even by his OWN FLESH AND BLOOD SISTER WHO DELIVERED THE FIRST PUNCH! Not only that but to add insult to injury, that little entourage of that faggot you call "Naruto" which I'm starting to think is just some self insertion of what you dream yourself to be, one of those girls grabbed Tsukune and demanded him to APOLOGIES for something that MOKA IS ALSO GUILTY OF! This is HYPOCRISY of EPIC PROPORTIONS. Oh, and that's not all but your "Naruto" is WORSE than Saizo. You see Saizo TRIED to rape people but FAILED. "Naruto" actually raped someone, or had someone raped. You can call it whatever want but that IS RAPE bro. As a man reading this, this is CLEARLY rape. It's actually funny how you make Naruto to be the "most honest and caring person I ever met in this school!" as Moka would say it but in REALITY (something YOU never heard of) "Naruto" is the sickest, most disgusting person I've ever read in fanfiction. Like I said, I have a feeling it's just a self insertion of who you want to be. And not only that, but why he had Kurumu raped was not even just. He had her RAPED just because she tried to take out that little whore harem you got, what's even worse is that she didn't even actually do it! But apparently this is enough for her to be defiled and humiliated by the people who ganged up on her and didn't even have the balls or humility to fight her one on one. But what do you expect from a bunch of rapists right? And while she was being raped, you bragged about how big "Naruto's" dick was, which he probably doesn't even have one. That and if you're a dude then you are clearly a faggot if you try to brag about another dude's dick size. Which I have a feeling you are. So, to rap this all up, your writing is horrid and abominable and you should really just stop writing because it's not just this story, but every story which you made that I've read. You're a failure as a writer and from what I'm reading you sound like an awful person as well. Just STOP writing. You're trash.
Shodai Uzukage- Naruto Uzumaki chapter 4 . 12/1/2017
All this bashing of Tsukune is ridiculous and unnecessary. He was one of my favorite characters largely for the same reason the girls in the series liked him, his modesty, kindness, bravery, dedication to his friends, and his ability to change people for the better.
In bashing Tsukune, it revealed how truly vile "Naruto" and his entourage is to be so cruel for essentially no reason.
All people who sadistically dream up ways to torture him need to grow up. It makes me wonder if you really are fans of the series or just there for the fanservice.
Halfrican18 chapter 1 . 10/26/2017
enjoyed it, hope for an update
MCRasengan chapter 4 . 9/15/2017
Good story. Hope you return to it.
zoa189 chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
good story so far always thought tsukune was kind of pathetic,is there a particular order to read the naru ex series in? or are they all self contained but set in the same universe?
thedarkwolf95 chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
ah ashes to asses dust to fuck, you shouldntve hit me with a god dam truck, my favorite Nostalgia Critic line
Dragoncyber22 chapter 4 . 1/30/2017
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
Faery66 chapter 4 . 1/7/2017
Hope to read more soon.

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