I read both chapters I LOVE IT! Odd/Aelita are perfect for each other.

Maybe Aelita can talk to Odd in the library or better The Hermitage Aelita's old family home about his dream. Jeremie could stumble in on them by accident. ;-)

This is a great story. I really hope that you will continue writing this.

PLEASE continue this, this chapter was just too SHORT!

Aelita! Just accept that you are destined to be with Odd!

This story is super cute! It flows quite nicely and it's very comfortable to read. :)

Please update soon, I'll be reading. :D

-toastedCroissants

Terrific chapter and fanfiction.

Plz update this story. I know you probably have more important things to do but its really good. The romance building is really great on your part compared to other Oddlita stories I've read. I love this. Its cute and innocent how their both slowly falling for one another. UPDATE SOON PLZZZ

Please finish this story! These two are my favorite couple from the show and this story has so much potential. I really hope that you'll continue it. :)

More please! :)

Please...continue...THIS!I love this stuff so much

This was just great. Continue at all cost please.

Awesome story. Your last two reviews I couldn't understand but the one before said "give up". DO NOT give up. Pretty please with Aelita on top (of Odd) . . . sorry, couldn't help it. XD I hope you continue soon :)

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elita anak ku tolong aku

elita dimana kau

give up