This hurts ... but I still love it ... good job ... (I’m speechless right now, sorry ...)

Ohmigosh! This made me BAWL MY EYES OUT! The first chapter I can really connect with since at this point in time, my own friends are sort of ignoring me! So when I read that Neku was being ignored, the waterworks started and wouldn't stop for the rest of the goddamn story! You're an awesome writer and I hope you don't stop!

ASDFGHJKl- I love Kuja so much, especially how he makes his words rhyme.

But Neku did has a really hard choice, Joshua or Kuja. Pfft- at first I thought that Kuja is Joshua's another self from another Shibuya LOL. But finally, his name is revealed. I laughed when Shiki and the others used Neko-chan to call him.

Oh...! So both of them are related. Are they twins? Brothers? Is Kuja older from Neku? The mystery goes on... 8D

But seriously, I love this story so much, it has just the right amout of angst, hurt/comfort, mystery and romance. I was kinda put off at first when Neku dating Kuja, but that kabuki man seriously grown on me and I had really hard choice whether to ship Neku with Kuja or Joshua in this story.

I can relate with Neku so much in this story, while I don't have any love interest but I do understand the pain and loneliness when your friends didn't pay attention to you. Poor Neku, I want to give him a hug.

Oops, it's already like an essay LOL thanks for this beautiful story and update please!

Wow this is just, so beautifully written i can't even like just, wow

I love the point of view! it seems so utterly perfect for this story. the way you use Him, them, she, instead of their names is just so nice and impacting

And it just comes across so solemn and sullen like you can really feel neku's sadness and how he feels almost broken (or maybe just broken) you feel it along with him.

And maybe it's because i read it at 2 in the morning last night but every step of the way i felt like i was in neku's place. i wanted him to hope again and find happiness. i wanted someone to notice him and accept him. i wanted it for him but i felt like it was happening to me.

you have a wonderful way with words and just making the words come to life and claim you and make you feel them like your own emotions and wow i wish i could write half as good as you can

inspiration right here haha

also if there was another thing i especially loved about this story is that i could picture practically every scene, usually when i read stories it's just certain parts, but this one, it was like a movie playing in my head seeing their expressions change and make movements
i just
ahh i'm kind of jsut fangirlling right now about your writing it's so greaaaat
i really cannot wait for the next chapter!

Have a great day man :33

Wow... hust wow... I've been rendered completely specchless by this story... It's really incredible...

So, before I lose my mind, I have to say, please tell me that ending is not leading to rape... I hate when a relationship starts that way, it's effing creepy (part of the reason I hate Gravitation). Other than that, my brain is still trying to process all of the awesomeness... thank you for writing this.

My heart hurts literally. Its just so...
Augh the pain. It doesn't matter that its long. I really love it!

I will wait for the update!

I'm not going to login at the moment . . .

But, my brain has just exploded . . .

I did not see that coming . . .

:O . . . .

Can't wait for an up-date!

This is just so sad! Poor Neku. Will Joshua ever love him back? Please have a happy ending for NeJo...

Wonderful, stupendous, and just...wow! I'm liking how you are using he to describe who it is, very clever. And then just describing and mentioning about Neku...it tears at my heart some at what 'he' is feeling. Looking great, and heck sorry about the review I don't really know what to say in it...opps.

I love this, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Gah!

I was holding my breath the entire time . . . O_O"

I really can't describe who brilliantly awesome you are for writing in this format!:D

I felt it the moment I read the first paragraph that this would not be a happy-go-lucky story but that is probably why I'm excited to read this to know how it will turn out in the end.:)

I feel like I should dispise Him, but I can't bring myself to . . . yet. I need to read more before I can place a judgment on Him.

My hearts bleeds for you Nekky!D:

Up-date when you can please; I can't wait to read more, and I'll review Wishes next.

Book Thief101