Awww, that last part was cute.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

you said this story was a "boozefest" well you should write ...less then sober... more often this was way to hot then cute then really hot then moarrrrr cute :)

China is...jealous?
Because America has fifty stars and he has five?
XD LOL

ROCHU ARE SUCK! Are you mad? This fanfiction is STUPID! THAT right ROCHU SUCK

Aww I hate America to china!

this is awesome but i don't get the last part (-.-')

I'll tell you straight up, you do NOT SUCK! You're word usage and description are wonderful. I can practically paint a picture in my head. Please do not let the trolling comment put you down. Block the user so she can no longer leave such offensive comments and report the comments to the admin. Continue with this because it's an excellent story that's beautifully written!

This was amazing and hot. I suspected China was up to something when I started reading this XD
I loved this and the ending was very cute

Yay! That was sweet! China is so tricky! Loved this!

hnggg it was cute. I'm glad you continued this. oh gawd I'll make some fluff later, kk? when I've done this superhusbands one ;-; but you will get mah rochu fluff fic.

I don't know why you say you're not good at fluffy stories, because this was so lovely and amazing! Good job, I really liked it :)

Haha! I want more!

Mmm, Yao's so badass. I'd actually love to find out why he was so angry. Writing two lemons tonight, thought reading this would be good inspiration.

Lovely as always. Hehe, lack of gas sales.

je;fvlaereog Yeah, Yao drunk... that was interesting. And awesome. And I want the second half... I really like how you made Yao that unpredictable. It was nice