Reviews for Could One Change?
Gry22 chapter 46 . 7/14/2018
I have really come to like this story, so I hope it will be continued someday. Oh, whenever I read stories, I like, I have a habit of getting and offering ideas. Hope you dont mind.
Idea one: When our heroes reach Fodra, as they travel around, they come across a boy, about Alice's age, who is one the last few surviving humans on Fodra. The Fodra boy ( you can decide his name ) join our heroes, and as he travel with them, he and Alice slowly grow close, to the point where they realize they are falling for each other.
Idea two: Our heroes befriend someone, who has built a time machine, along with a hour-glass designed necklace which tells how long you have before you are pulled back to your right timeline. Just as he/she is about demonstrate for our heroes, the whole place starts to shake, due to a monster attack. Our heroes tries to run out, but a burning pillar falls over and cuts Alice off from the others. Seeing no choice, Alice runs to the time machine, grabs a hour-glass necklace and jumps into the time machine. She is sent off just in time before the machine is crushed. The next time Alice opens her eyes, she is met with a curious child Lambda and Director Cornell. After explaining only to Director Cornell and child Lambda about her being from the future, Alice spends some time with the two, while looking at the hour-glass necklace from time to time to see how much time she has. Then, when child Lambda is used for an experiment, Emeraude has Alice locked in a cell. Alice manages to get out and locate child Lambda. She and Director Cornell are ready to protect child Lambda by any means necessary. Alice holds child Lambda's hand as all three run to the escape pod. After Director Cornell is dead, Alice notices the hour-glass necklace starting to glow. Pulling it out, she sees only a few sand stones left. When realizing that she is about to return to her timeline, leaving him behind, child Lambda, desperately tries to turn the hour-glass necklace upside down, but it doesn't work. Seeing that nothing was working, all Alice and child Lambda can do is hug each other as Alice slowly starts to fade away. Alice promises child Lambda that they will meet again in the future before she disappears, leaving child Lambda alone. And once back in her timeline, later, during the final battle against Richard and Lambda, Alice tries to speak to lambda. Due to his anger and hatred, he had almost forgotten about her and Director Cornell. Alice then says something she said to child Lambda, which can be the trigger for Lambda to remember Alice and her promise. As Alice holds out her hand, it looks like both Richard and Lambda are gonna take it, but then Lambda's anger and hatred comes back, and he has Ricard send out a blast. While Asbel and the others are thrown back, Alice finds herself inside a floating barrier, created by Richard and Lambda. Because he now remember, Lambda decides that Alice shall be the only one to survive and see the 'new' world he and Richard are planning to make.
Puuhhh.. Glad to get that out my head.
Guest chapter 46 . 9/27/2017
PLEASE update soon! I want to see how everything will go!
Guest chapter 46 . 5/31/2015
PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASE UPDATE!
cybeast777 chapter 46 . 7/23/2013
Wow almost 50 chapters, this has come a long way since I first started reading this :)
cybeast777 chapter 45 . 7/23/2013
No worries on the wait I will wait for as long as possible for each of your awesome chapters :)
cybeast777 chapter 44 . 3/27/2013
Every new chapter I read makes me wish that Richard had a sister in this series. Because if you think about it there isn't anyone left in his family that is actually alive that we know of. I know there was that weird that about his uncle and that optional dungeon Zhonecage, but I highly doubt he counts as family anymore lol.
AllSpark Princess chapter 44 . 3/27/2013
Hey, is it possible to make the chapters a little longer? I just hope Alice can hang in there. Hope you update this really soon.
AllSpark Princess chapter 43 . 3/5/2013
This is a great story. Hope you update this soon.
cybeast777 chapter 43 . 3/3/2013
It still amazes me how he always comes late despite having the advantage of flight. I want to fly too lol
Mike AZ 2 chapter 42 . 3/2/2013
Hey, sorry again for being scarce. Its just that I pretty much know the storyline, having gone through four or five playthroughs of the game.

Anyway, its a good chapter.
cybeast777 chapter 42 . 3/2/2013
Sweet another chapter! And a nice cliffhanger into the next one lol
cybeast777 chapter 41 . 2/4/2013
Another awesome chapter and a slight hint to "you know who" being behind all this :)
cybeast777 chapter 40 . 12/12/2012
Thanks for another awesome chapter. No worries I think everyone is going through some pretty busy stuff this month and I think being able to release at least one chapter is enough to brighten anyone's day :)
Renaglory chapter 38 . 12/9/2012
Please update soon I miss your chapters.
Renaglory chapter 39 . 11/29/2012
TEAM ASBLICE FOR THE WIN XD.
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