"I'm not abandoning any fic" proceeds to totally abandon the fic, you're such a hypocrite you know that?

You literally made this out to be a harem fic from the start and suddenly changed it midway you absolute cunt, don't get frustrated when people ask if it is a harem fic or not when you lead them on.

uh? what? your story is so confusing as it seems like you change stuff constantly without explaining. I mean, in the beginning Miranda was basically in love with Naruto but suddenly she's with Gaara, same thing with Tali and Garrus now. Especially since you said Garrus liked a red haired girl a few chapters ago...? it's like I'm reading one story at one point and on the next page it has transformed into an entirely different story.

You nerfed Naruto quite a lot, making him so weak that punching a husk breaks a bone in his hand and for some reason he gets exhausted after using Kuramas chakra mode for just a few minutes. Oh, and he also still needs a clone to create a rasengan(news flash, he learnt how to do it with one hand at 16). I'm not even gonna say anything about how your Naruto never uses his clones or sage mode.

Chapter 16, Thames valley university is now called west London university, where I go, we're even studying the same subject

Fuck yeah!

are you done with this fic

the sections with Romance feels a little bit too forced and cringy

in naruto they enhance their muscles with chakra so dont really believe that he would break a bone when punching a damn husk.

nerf

way too fast paced romance

and why would his jutsu be weaker when his using armor

naruto could have used chakra to stay put on tge floor in the car in chap 3

romance thing little bit too fast

and whats with the akatsuki cloud thing stupid