Brilliantly insightful into Bella and Andy, but Ted was a Hufflepuff, not a Gryffindor. Keep writing

ohhh, I love Andromeda, and I always wondered about her story, because of course there was no way her family would have let her marry Ted without a fight. This was heartbreaking, to put it honestly, and despite the fact that they did get thirty years together, it doesn't make it hurt any less, especially with the knowledge that Tonks dies shortly after her father. My heart goes out to Andromeda, who has to grow old alone. It's a shaking reminder of war, to be honest, and how it rips families apart.

Wow,Vicky, I love the concept of Bellatrix cursing Andromeda's relationship and that it led to the relationship's ultimate downfall. This was really beautiful, and I really want to know about their childhood now,because I have some idea of what kind of sisterly dynamic they have between them. Great work! :D

VICKY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU'VE BEEN A BAD BAD GIRL

This was awful, Vicky! You really had me sobbing, for this was just, eurgh! You really gave Andromeda an innocent touch, and that was lovely, BUT IT GAVE ME FEELS ARGH. And Ted's death, nooooooooooooooo...

You could've gone on more about Tonks and also about the fact that Ted was muggleborn and Andromeda was pureblood (there was only one reference to that as far as I can see), but otherwise, this was amazing, and argh!

Alex xox

PS - don't kill me again, okay?

YAY I LOVE ANGST. -claps happily-
omg sorry it's taken me so long to reviiew this I SUCK.
ahsflksa. this was actually the best thing ever and it's been so long since i've read a really good tedromeda and THIS WAS IT. oh gosh. it's so tragic and I really, really love it not just because it's tedromeda and it's written so flawlessly, but I also love that you included bellatrix because favourite character right hurr.
I love this, I really do; I've read a lot of fics about the fact that Bellatrix killed Ted, but none quite like this, and it was really interesting and askfhklsa SO SAD how Andy was always anxious and how bellatrix kept her promise and SO MANY TEARS my heart just ripped out at Ted's death honestly. It's beautifully written and even if you broke my heart i love it i love it i love it and THANK YOU.

Wow, this is lovely, Vicky! I really enjoyed reading this because Tedromeda otp 5ever. But this is beautiful anyways. I like that Andromeda was always worried and anxious that Bellatrix would destroy her relationship, and I loved the way you wrote it but you also stuck to canon. Flawless work!

omfg Vicky I love this because Tedromeda was one of the first pairings I ever read and more people should write it and it was absolutely flawless! You're writing is so beautiful and how she said that she was going to destroy Andromeda's happiness and I'm crying atm because it was so BEAUTIFUL.

OH MY GOD VICKY SLAKJHGAKJ /YOU'RE/ DESTROYING /ME/ NOW.

Yeah, I absolutely loved this, bb. Ted/Andromeda is one of my otps, and I adore the way you portray it here - with Andromeda having to fight against everything to be with him, and Ted being the optimist. And ALKDHDKHLKAHS SADNESS WHEN HE DIES AND JUST CREYS.

I really like the Bellatrix/Andromeda sister relationship, I always find that interesting to read about and you definitely did it justice here. "Bellatrix always wins, she knows." - that line gave me shivers. I feel for Andromeda, how she tried to fight against Bellatrix when all that time she knew it was in vain.

And the way you wrote it was amazing and stuff...ily and you should write more HP ;)

WHOO VICKY HI :D

favourite part: (As she walks down the hallway from the drawing room in which she was in with her sister, Bellatrix yells, "I will destroy this relationship! It may take a year, it may take fifty, but I will break you and Ted. You will not be eternally happy, I assure you!") there were many amazing parts, but for serious, that was my favourite. it was so realistic and so /bellatrix/ and tbh, i was kind of missing the main point of the story, since i love bellatrix too much. eheh :")

least favourite part: ("It is with great regret that we inform our listeners of the murders of Ted Tonks and Dirk Cresswell.") i think my heart stopped beating at that point in time. [ WHYYY VICKY WHYYY I MEAN YES IT'S CANON BUT YOU DIDN'T HAVE TO RIP OUT MY HEART AND STEP ALL OVER IT ]

overall comments: it was reallyreally sad D: but still amazing. (: and in your typical fashion, ever-flawless. :D

x
drew

OhmyGod, Vicky, you had to go and break my heart, didn't you?

This was wonderfully written, as always — I really enjoyed it. I absolutely love Tedromeda, even thoug h I haven't actually read much of them. The premise of this fic was really good — although really sad D: — and I really liked it.

I especially liked the last bracket, because Andromeda was definitely strong until the end, because Ted's still there for her, really.

Great job! :)

She's your sister! Bellatrix makes my blood boil :/
But lovely as usual :)
-Vitzy-