Began what?... Enjoyed the story, your writing is pretty poetic. :)

I love it! If they ever make a novel of the blank period, I would like it to be something like this. I think we'd all agree that SasuSaku blank period should get the spotlight it deserves. I need all the little moments and the little details - just like how you did it here. Thank you for this.

Fue muy bello, muy IC. Yo también creo que no se demorarían más años en estar juntos de los que ya se demoraron en la serie, pero también siento que ambos necesitan un ritmo diferente, sobre todo Sasuke, por lo que los puedo ver en una situación así. Me gustó muchísimo que no fuera un te amo la declaración de esta historia, sino que ambos ya saben y entienden eso, su relación está más allá de eso y sinceramente se declaran que tienen miedo de perder al otro. Me parece una declaración muy linda y significativa, tomando en cuenta el mundo donde se desarrollaron y las veces que estuvieron a punto de perderse.

Amo la naturalidad con que su relación comienza a surgir, y nunca esperé leer una especie de slow burn tan corto, pero fue tan lindo, tan puro y adorable que no pude más que amarlo. Gracias por este one-shot, que se va a mis favoritos.

The build up is so sweet and delectable and perfect! I love how everything is so natural and not rushed as how I picture them to be.

Dayum... Their feelings doe. Wow. Your writing showed it all nicely :) Good work. I know I'm years late but well... *Meh/Shrugs*

Ahh i love this so much, it was written before naruto ended but you wrote it like so accurately, it says at 19 which ig would be the time when sasuke comes back from his journey. And it just fits so perfectly, love thissss

Lovely!

I love the way you use words so as to create a very vivid picture of the story. Great job!

Love!

My soul was sent ablaze when he said “you terrify me” oh my gosh amazing thank you

This has to be one of my all time favorites. It was beautifully and well written and it gave me closure. I know they end up together, but I’ve always had a hard time picturing that transition...and after reading this I can picture that whole story unfold. Thank you for this.

Wow! Good work!

Loved it!

Kanpeki! I loved it! Thanks so much!

Oh my god I found it! I've been looking everywhere for this story and I finally found it again! It's just soooo good. The poetic aspect of it all, how it's well space in time so that it doesn't seem rushed... bliss