I loved it! You're a great airtist and writer! This story gave me flashbacks to this awfully big slide I had to go down, It was scary. This was pretty relatable though!

grate story

WHOOO! WAY TO GO, THEO!

That's a really good little story, I really liked it alot.

Wow Michelle! Keep Writing! Your writing is just as good as your art!

Where r some of your other stories? :(

Hi I'm a really big fan of your drawings. I loved this story also. Just saying I haven't really got an account for deviantART yet. Within the next few months or so, expect me to be commenting on your art :)

Great story I loved it

I feel bad that I haven't reviewed this!

Anyway, this is really cute. But poor Theodore, I'd be a little hesitant to ride on something called the Drop Dead too! I really love the cover art for this too; it's perfect!

I hope you decide to write more in the future, I think you're really good at it. :)

This was really cute. Good job! :)

Oh my gosh this was so cute! I just love Theo, he's just the cutest thing ever! I didn't even know you were on FanFiction, that's great! I just love your work on Deviantart, it's absolutely amazing. I hope to read more FanFictions from you.

XD You're as good at writing fanfiction as you are drawing! AWESOME!

I love this! It's amusing, fun to , truthful. well written. over all awesome!

love the story, and i even liked the pic.

Everyone's personalities were SPOT-ON! This was very funny and nice work! :)