ah fuck you havent updated in so long. i hope life is going okay for you. im kinda praying youll come back and just give us an ending. something. youre a good writer. thanks for the stories.

This story is so great! Please don't abandon it.

Thus, Vlad has officially earned himself a VERY special place in Hell made just for him. Fuck you, Fruitloop. Fuck. You.

i miss this one, im still waiting for more lol

This is a very good story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I do have a few questions. Where are Jack and Jazz? (I would guess Jazz went back to college, but wouldn't she make a good hostage/pawn for Vlad to manipulate?) Shouldn't they be there at the house so they're safe too?
And another option would be to use the Fenton Gauntlets, the metal gloves w/sharp talons, to separate Plasmius from Masters? Then they could permanently Thermos the vile ghostly part of Vlad.
And why isn't the Fenton Ghost shield, that covers the entire building, up and running? That would keep Vlad out since he's part ghost.
(One last thing. Danny forgot all about his bathroom break when he discovered the note. He's going to be desperate when he wakes up. LOL)
Keep up the good work and don't let real life get you down.
pbow

Poor Dani:-( Even Danny didn't suffer as much at that age. How did she escape from Vlad in the first place though? And where are Jack and Jazz?
Anyways, this is a heartbreaking yet wonderful story:-)

very nice, i love Danny's connection with Dani

very nice, it was sweet though the story doesn't seem to be moving much, I wouldn't mind seeing Vlad sealed away for a very long time he deserves it after what he did to Dani

Nice job! Again, I apologize for not reviewing earlier (I'm probably going to say that each time unless I happen to review the day you update). Anyway, I love Tucker's epiphany regarding Maddie and how she's adjusting to them. It's awesome that Dani's awake and that she realizes that Danny and his friends and family are her family. I love the thought process concerning her past and how she comes to realize how much they care for her. I also love Danny's protectiveness. Awesome job and I look forward to the remainder of the story!

I really love this story! I hope you update soon!
...just a quick question, where's Jack?

That's touching! Can't wait to be reading on :) keep going!

I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier! Thank you, this chapter was so beautiful. I love the interaction between Maddie and Dani, even though Dani's unconscious the whole time; it was perfect. I love how Maddie's so protective of Dani, even though she barely knows her. Has the whole story really only taken place over a day? It feels a lot longer. Anyway, I also like how Maddie wants to get Vlad the moment she gets the letter; that she's protective of Dani. And Sam's thoughts of Danny and Dani are great! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Okay.. Two questions. 1. What about school? 2. What about Sam and Tucker's parents?

You said "Aaaaaad". Not "Aaaaand". I like it

At first, when she said that those words shocked her, I thought that it was completely normal. Then, I re-read it about 3 times, I noticed that he said 'your mom'. And I like it so far.