| Reviews for The New Light |
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2012 I like this |
Chuu112 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 it interesting :) |
moonray9 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 D'awww. That was really, really cute. These two idiots, they make such a perfect dysfunctional pair. Great work with this, it was fantastic and very emotional, though there's a few repeated mistakes here and there. Like "I need to be more stronger" that repeats a few times. "More stronger" is grammatically incorrect, it could be "I need to be much stronger" or "I need to be stronger" or even "I need to be more strong". Anyways, nice job! |
hiyomi chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 Cute chapter :) |
Queen Keri chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 Aww I know right? These parts on the manga were just so TT 3 It was a good read! Thanks for writing this much love, keri |
ben4kevin chapter 1 . 8/2/2012 I really liked this |