That was so good and sweet and amazingly awesome. I love how you show their relationship and what Adrian said at the end was just amazing!

Gorgeous. You've captured Adrian really well. And Sydney too. I was disappointed but happy at the same time that nothing happened at the end - if was exactly what Sydney would have done.
And those last few lines. OH MY LORD! Perfection.

HAHAHAHA! SHE HAD TO WAKE UP THAT EARLIER JUST FOR GELATO?
and not just any kind it had to be POMEGRANATE gealto! hahaha!

cravings dont we all just love them? :D

well other than THAT i think this was a wonderful peice of work and i have just realised that there is a chapter 2! whoops...i better go and read that...XD

well bye bye! maybe we can talk about your stories next week? unless your school decided to be (input any swear here that you prefer) faces and blocked you off fanfiction!

well enough of my rantings and onwards to chapter 2!

yay! I loved it, Adrian catching her... swoon. You should totally write more Sydrian fanfiction, it's really good. :D

ohhh this is soo good u should make it into a story, please

I liked this a lot. I WANT MORE!

Adorable!

OMG loved it.

This one was good. Did he paint her while she slept? keep writing

Awww, so cute! I really love this. Its so good! You could be a writer:D please write more!