great story, too bad you never finished. :(

I love this story already! I especially love that you made the "date" her father as opposed to a romantic interest. The idea of her going out with her dad was really well-executed. I can't wait for more chapters!

The reader is quite thrilled to note that she expected Molly's 'date' to be her father (it made complete and utter sense!), and was quite happy by the fact that it wasn't a real romantic date. The reader would also venture a guess and say the woman is Mrs. Hudson (and her hip?).

The reader is also overjoyed at how the story is progressing and wishes to see its completion and enjoy all the chapters the author has to give to the audience. The reader thanks the author for the deliverance of the story. :)

As much as I love fasted action paced introductions, these character studies have been excellent and intriguing to read. I can't wait to see how the plot will flow! :)

You're brilliant! I love the story and the way you write it. I really liked the first chapter; I think the background story of the Holmes brothers is awesome. In fact, it's too perfect it just got accepted to my headcanon lmao. And I totally did not expect the man to be her dad. Sherlock also got it wrong which is something. Maybe the necklace belongs to her mother that's why it looks tacky and dirty. And the woman who payed a lot of money, I haven't got a clue who she is. Haha

I hope you update soon. :)

Haha! I knew it! It was either her dad or her father figure.

Omigod this is heartbreaking! I hope John kicks Sherlock's butt for saying that stuff to Molly! Update soon!

Hello. I red your story so far and cannot wait till you update. :) Seriously, I love it! :) I've never read a Sherloly story with this kind of view upon it. :) So, go you! :) Hope you'll manage to update soon. :)

Her dad! That is incredibly sweet! But I've just been struck with the feeling that something horrible is going to happen to him, though I sincerely hope not... But please write more! This story is so well written, and I just love it!

Wow, excellent start! I usually wait till I finish a story before reviewing, but I must say I am thoroughly impressed with your writing. I look forward to reading the rest :)

Figured it out, enjoyed it. :)

The reader thinks that this has been a fine start and is looking forward to more. :)

How interesting! Just about every Sherlolly fic I read has Molly's father already dead. Yeah...they always indicate he was a good man but you never get any story on the father/daughter relationship. I know you haven't updated in awhile, but I hope you finish it. I wish there were more stories with her dad alive.

I like Mary, and now I'm looking forward to see Molly play at the wedding.

Lovely story. Your Molly is wonderfully done. I was hoping the man was her father. I believe it's possibly her father who receiving the surgery. I earnestly hope you continue this story.