that sick bastard must die.

Well done on writing this. It's so sad yet it's has some excellant happy and hopeful moments. At the end it actually caused me to shead a tear or two (which is quite rare for me when reading), so again well done.

Also thanks for introducing me to an amazing song.

I love it, all of this story. From the introductions in chapters 1-3 to Dusk, Luna, and Thorn are pieced perfectly together.

Thorn is shown in this story to be the true definitive leader of the band and of her sisters though experiance, leadership, and love for her sisters and you write her true to character.

Luna is shown just as true, comeing the picture perfect community and being the star of her family to being disowned and abondoned by her own. family. She is almost like the bridge between Thorn's leadership and Dusk's rebellion. Like she is the glue that holds the sisters together.

Then their is dusk. Dusk is show to have the darkest past out of the three. Child abuss, death of a close friend, and murder of her own mother. The deep seeded hate between her and her father is the base of the conflict and for the sequal. She's fierce, rough, and yet so loving toward her friends. Her eyes in the witches ghost tell this story, and you have put it into a great story :)
Witch, you have a way of telling a great story.
Dresner

Bravo! Bravo! that was truly awesome! the ending was marvelous! I'm a little sad it's over but I'm looking forward to reading more about history repeating. So anyways I love your work and can't wait for more!

nice chapter may be small but it was nice. sorry I haven't reviewed in a little while. I can't wait for updates in history repeating! I love that one.

Nice! this made my day, update soon!

That was great! Alittle weird on the third chap thoe. I mean she got sent away pretty fast. But overall its great! Can't wait for more!

reminds me of Sucker Punch..

Ahhhhh! I see wat you did dere!:) nice I like it. Thumbs up!