Reviews for The Areani
Teufel1987 chapter 23 . 9/29/2019
Nice.
A bit rambly though.

Spotted a small mistake: Vernon Dursely couldn't have spent "hundreds of dollars" on anything considering that he lives in a country that doesn't use the Dollar as currency.

As for the ministry cars ... don't they also have an enchantment that allows them to squeeze through tight spots in traffic? Pretty sure they do...
Oh, and if you read the books again, you'll see that magic affects electronics. Not electricity.
Electrics are very different from electronics. The former is a simple device that uses electricity as its source of energy. Press a switch, close the circuit and it carries out the one function it was meant to do. Examples are doorbells, toasters, car ignitions and, well, power windows. Magic really wouldn't interfere with those components as it is stated to affect electronics.
Electronics are more complex with relatively more sophisticated circuitry that allows them to carry out more complex decisions. So your digital clocks, calculators, mobile phones, electronic listening devices etc. that's the stuff that magic is supposed to affect.

Anyway till next chapter. Happy to still see you alive.
King Cam the 1st chapter 23 . 9/26/2019
Love the story so far, I can’t wait until you update again.
hzlanderson chapter 6 . 6/15/2019
VoldemortPotter!"

HarryHey, Tom. How ya been buddy?"

Voldemort
Panther-Strife chapter 22 . 1/29/2019
Umm hi there Mentally Impaired!?

I am sorry for wasting your time but I am wondering if you take story requests and xovers?
Bosma19 chapter 22 . 3/27/2018
I really like your story and the rol harry has in this story I also like i5 that you made Voldemort
Still as smart and tactical as he was as Tom Riddle
fhl1234 chapter 21 . 11/15/2017
Loved it. Thanks for the update.
Roma Vivit chapter 20 . 10/23/2017
Great to see this story continuing! When I saw the notification I was so happy, this story(and the one before) have been so amazing to read and the storyline is amazing. The new chapter is very satisfying. We get to see that, although he has trained so much he still has a long way to go, and more training to do. The next part with Greyback should be exciting. Will he have other people's help, such as Remus or other werewolves? Possibly use any vampire clans in the area to help eradicate the werewolves? I guess we will have to wait and see. Anyways, great story and great chapter, can't wait for more.
~Roma Vivit
Tyler Charles chapter 19 . 8/5/2017
I'm slightly confused with how this left off, and how the Phoenix story started... Are you needing to finish this rewrite still, and then rewrite the Phoenix one? btw.. I REALLY LOVE your story, it is amazing!
Ysdswe chapter 19 . 7/4/2017
Just finished your stories and they are great ! But wanted to ask you if Areani story was dead or if you were planning on finishing it.
Regardless, great work

With regards from Sweden.
Alpha Death chapter 19 . 2/26/2017
Well, love the story after having reread it. But where's the rest of it?
observentuser chapter 19 . 1/16/2017
Okay, small confession...It took me less than three days to read Death Eaters of Hogwarts and The Areani. Have to say, very impressed. The characters are very believable, I like how you have Harry building up his strength and repertoire of skills and magic. Still wondering why the Tiger though. Looking forward to more. :-)
fernandfeather chapter 19 . 2/22/2016
Haha poor Harry is so defensive about his age.
deleted97deleted chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
It could have been good but I fear it's a Harry/Hermione so no thanks
iithillienn chapter 18 . 2/1/2016
This is an excellent fanfiction, I very much enjoyed it. Will you be posting any more of it?
Guest chapter 18 . 1/1/2016
I don't normally review mostly because I'm very very lazy. Your work however is very deserving of a review and I'd probably get a bad feeling if I don't leave one so here I am. I read a lot of fanfics, ridiculous ones where Harry learns all magical knowledge in one year and where he defeats Voldemort by summoning him simply because hes so very powerful. And I mostly don't even mind. I read these fics and enjoy them and spend the rest of the day laughing at how ridiculous they are. I'm not even sure what it is. Your story is pretty ridiculous as well. A boy who slacks off for four years but almost wins the dueling tournament against people who spent their entire lives preparing? But I can't help that I still fell in love with your story. It's great, it's as simple as that. It's great that Harry can't defeat adult wizards based on merely a lightning bolt. It's great that Harry doesn't stay with one girl. It's great that he's just a teenager. I love that he doesn't find the information he wants the first time he breaks in. Because that's how it's supposed to be, you know? I can't do more than applaud you. I'd post this unanonymously if I weren't too lazy to sign in. Have a good day!
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