go for 60 chapters ,it can happen

Oh this is THE BEST STORY EVER! I was so laughing during this chapter! It was perfect! Did I get a feeling of a soul bond coming up between Fleur and Harry? And they will see each other sooner than they think. And the teasing of Morgan about Harry was hilarious! Can I say it any plainer than BEST STORY EVER! Please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! *poppy dog eyes*!

My deepest compliments on your story
ps. Please continue this amazing, fantastic, wonderful, brilliant story!

Still waiting for an update D: I love this fanfic!

I can't help but feel a bit bad fr Draco, and at the same time hate him for what he tried...

A very nice update, but in a few places you change from past to present tense which spoils the flow of the narrative.

Fleur's only part veela...so how could she turn into a harpy like creature..? then again, this is not really following the canon much. But even if her mom was a full veela, she would only be half. oh well whatever. Good story.

Awesome Fic, but you have some minor spelling mistakes in the chapter for example: You named choices wrong as you typed the word "Chives" instead.

You might want read the fic yourself and see what is wrong and what to fix or for future fics you may want to read the chapters before you upload them, I have recently done this for my own Fics and it has helped immensely in correcting and improving them.

Also I have a future fic that has my own OC entering the HP World and helping when he can in many instances in Harry's life and I have a poll up that links to it of which I would really Appreciate you voting on it.

It's really well written. I love the whole big brother-little sister relationship between Harry and Luna. Just a little remark , well remark is a big word. In French 'yes' is 'oui' not 'qui' which is 'who'. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I was laughing soo hrd at e end of this chapter! Loved Sirius's relation!

I am in love with this story, it is Fantastic! Please update soon!

Things seem a little rushed in places but an enjoyable story.

Some errors from this and other chapters. Grimmauld Place, not Grimmuld Place. Your hare became a rabbit and then turned back into a hare, they are two different species, also a hare only lives for around 4 years in the wild.

Ducati motorbikes are manufactured by Ducati, so how could a private individual build one from scratch?

Not a bad start, but two things that annoyed me:

1. The Dursleys live in Privet Drive, not Private Drive.

2. Dumbledore asking Harry how his dead parents were and Harry answering 'Good'

Off to read chapter 2 and hoping for no more gaffes like that.

More plz

I kind of wish Luna was with Harry, but Fleur will do XD I loved this chapter :)

please keep going loving the story...