Reviews for Atonement
Minight51 chapter 1 . 3/24/2017
man that was hot! you are a good writer and I look forward to read anything else you have written.
mebemeg chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
I thoroughly enjoyed this one-shot. It was written well, and I liked the idea behind it. :)
Anonymous chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Good job and I like it!
calleyrose chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Damn yugi is so cute! And when he is with yami/atem (or both) it is so hot
ChibiLee chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
stupid bug boy
SnuggleBunnyChanWasHere chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I don't think I'll review the next few. I'm tired with my allergies acting up, but this was majorly cute. Yami is so sweet to Yugi!
Well, Chyu-Chyu for now!
Lerya-chan chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
This is just great!
Sweet and hot at the same time!
Good job on writing it!
UryuuByakuyaBabe chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Meep. Oh my God, I fell in love with this. The fact that Yami appeared so uke-ish at the beggining made my day. Kudos! X3
Dechimo chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
That. Ufhhhh. Was amazing!

I love it I hope you continue writing
Kurogawa Yumi chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
This was very very nice too. I like to read stories where the spirit is kind of vulnerable like that...
Also: "In a few hours, the sun will rise!" xD sorry, made me giggle.

Keep it up!

Yumi
C. S. Stars chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Damn! That was awesome.
Saskie chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
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Silver-Haired-Thief chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Wow, this was really good!:)
starsinjars chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
i find it hilarious that they had bodily pleasure while in their spiritual forms xD but this was nice, interesting, and i believe you would be right in the case whether or not Yami would have done something having not doing so in the moment.
Nice job!
Ignys Umbrys Interius chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Holy... i can't stop reading this... sequel please? *puppy eyes* we all want one!
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