HOW COULD YOU FINISH IT THERE?! i thought Lust liked Ed! how could you? *sobs*
on a lighter note, the story was FANTASTIC! I LOVED IT! great way to fit it into the story line in a way that the universe could continue on the same as the original. You are BRILLIANT. Please do another. Maybe if ED WAS SELECTED TO BE GREED.

you are amazing at writing these! wish they were part of the actual story! :)

Why didnt you have lust suggest to sacrifice your gate of truth. The ending was dull I wish it was less like the manga and anime dont get me wrong it was a good story

Great story i might like it better than the anime or manga

This was AMAZING! Thank you for one incredible fic, and I love how you left it potentially open for more? ;)

I was about to cry at the end! Lust! Why! ~ TTTT
It was a very good story! I loved it! 3

I would have liked it to go on longer, but I enjoyed what I was given, this was a good story, maybe one day I'll write my own version of this

Damn i wanted more : ( best fmab fafic in the site ; )

*insert meme “Aw shit here we go again”*

Lmao

Author! I’ve been following this since chapter 5 and ever since then the concept of Lust!Winry has always been a fun idea to play around with. However, this particular fanfic has always stuck out to me and I haven’t seen anyone else play around with the idea as fleshed out as you did. It’s engaging, fun, creative, steamy at times, and just a really really good read. I would catch myself drawing your version of Lust!Winry from time to time.

It’s bittersweet seeing this work end but I truly enjoyed reading through it all and I look forward to seeing any to seeing your future works!

To be honest, this kind of feels like you’re setting up for a sequel story, rather than a finite end; Father and the homouncli are still around, and his plan is still very much in motion.

you have to continue this! It is soooo good! I'm very impatient! XD

Of all my years looking for a book that makes me happy your story proves to me that this is it

Loved this chapter! That action at the end was soooo suspenseful! It was so cute to see Winry/Lust having a chance to talk with Ed again. Can't wait to see their reaction to Ed and Ling being eaten by Gluttony! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! Another chapter! I really love your writing! You completely nail these characters :D Aww, it was great to see EdWin reunite after their night of having sex xD NO LING! Maybe he will find a way out like he did when he and Ed got trapped in Gluttony in the show? Anywhoo, you got me craving more :) Great job!

I loved this! I'm really glad you updated. Seeing the frecuency of your updates I didn't dare hoping too much to read the continuation of the story soon, but since I started reading your fic -about 2 and a half months ago- you've already uploaded two chapters, yay! Hope this has a happy ending haha, can't wait to read the next chapter :)