aww, that was super sweet :)

Damn I loved the story. I know you said it was a one-shot, but I'm hoping you'll write some more.

Cute! Loved that episode! Algebraic story!

3 words.
So
Frekin.
CUTE!

Sequal Now. That was short, but great

loved it! )

Really solid first chapter. I missed the episode where they kissed, but this is good story. Update soon.

You did a good job of capturing the tone and language of the show. Mathematical!

I have no idea how you couldn't be proud of this fanfic. I wish I could write as good as you. I always thought of flame princess as a difficult character to write about because of the shifts and changes in her appearance. But in this fanfic, you make it look so easy, and you do i really well. I've love this pairing, but this fanfic made me love it even more. You really capture how this relationship is a challenge, but you keep the persevering spirit of the two alive, and I must say, you capture that in a very clever way. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more in the future.

NAcha'z Ninja, out ;)

Beautiful cap to a wonderful episode! Im a huge fan of Finn and Flame princess, and your story made my lunch hour!

Two words: Beautiful and Awesome
I loved it :)

This was awesome! I've never been into fanficton but I must say, I enjoyed this one. Last night's episode was craaaaaazy! PB went on about how the Earth was going to melt and junk but at the same time, she didn't deny that she was jealous of FP. Either way, Pendelton Ward will have another FP and Finn episode soon. This will hold me until then. :)

That was amazing, no matter what you say. Short and sweet. Very nice. :D

Wow. amazing. only problem, WE NEED MOAR!

Amazing fanfic! I loved the episode, too! You updated it really fast! I really wanted to write a FPF fanfic after I watched the episode, too, but my writing sucks. Even though I was in the "heat of the moment".