The emotional develops in the story are rushed but otherwise I enjoyed it.

so far this story looks good, what I don't like is seeing that "datebayo" verbal tic. Every fanfic has it, once works in a fanfiction but seeing it repeating itself. I'm loosing interest ...

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I know you haven't updated in a while but I would like to put in my few cents! Firstly, I'm appalled by some of the reviews you got. I think your idea is very interesting and while I am interested in Team 12 and Team 7's development, I'm also intrigued by Rin's own problems. It makes me wonder how her presence and the OCs will make a difference on the canon characters and Kakashi

Hmm, it looks good so far. Different team mechanics, but that's understandable if the teams are different. Shame it hasn't been updated for so long.

PLEASE UPDATE!

Love it can't wait for more

This is a really great fic. I like how you deviate from canon exam challenges. Your OCs aren't annoying and Rin is fascinating.

So obito is dead in this?

Rin died, Kakashi killed her, or is this an AU? If so, you should post that. An AU doesn't mean a different settings (modern) btw, it means Alternate Universe.

awesome story best rin fanfick out there keep it up

All chapters are honestly great! Although it is a bit slow for my tastes, it's definitely one of the better rated T fanfictions I've read! I will follow this story closely! Also, could you please try to give Naruto more than one jutsū, at least during the one month of training before the finals, if you are inclined towards doing that? It doesn't seem feasible that any sensei would send in their Genin with only one jutsū apiece.

300th review! Love the story, but please update! the characters are written so well in this fic.

You're a good writer, but I have no tolerance for versions of Naruto below a certain intelligence threshold. This Naruto is below that threshold.