aww. great story man. when I read that last part I just wanted to hug Marceline and wipe those tears away. Then I would go to PB and slap her for making Marceline cry and demand why she broke up with her.

Woah. Intense. That was genius! I am a fan of fics that twists the story in the cartoon. XD

I'm sure they did it in full porpuse. Very sweet and nice job you did here.

Oh that was exactly what I needed. I totes cried. Well more like i paused it right after that part n screamed at the tv and crying- ya know, moving through the feels in an orderly fashion. My glob bubbline is cannon glob darn it !

Make a sequel or more chapter pl0x :3

WE ALL KNOW WHO SHE WAS TALKING ABOUT IN THE SHOW.
DON'T DENY IT.

Very nice story! I love Marceline as being someone who can be genuinely happy that Finn found someone who returns his feelings. They've got a great friendship dynamic without trying to throw in another romantic angle. Also love the Marceline/PB nod. I admit since "What Was Lost" I listen to everything either of those girls say for subtext now. :) Well done, everything was in character, lovely missing scene for a fun episode. Thanks for posting!

Why didn't I catch that snippet from her? Lol Still, great story.

Nice Sweet Story!
I'm so glad to know I wasn't the only one who got all fan-girl (or if your a guy, fan-boy) when she said that :D

I love how perfect your characterization is! Wonderful job!

Cute story!

I love this! You're spot on with the characters, hope there's more but this is even good as a one-shot :)

Nice Start. Keep going.