“Hi there, as a patient diagnosed with Familial Dysautonomia, I was very upset when I read the part where you said "if you didn't cry a single tear or feel bad, then you should feel bad because you're a bad person." I would just like to say objectively that we may have our circumstances that prevent us from feeling bad, but that certainly does not make us bad people. Perhaps someone reading this has experienced something much worse in their lives and something like this wouldn't affect them too much. For instance, someone who has been forced to join the navy in order to protect their family would have to toughen up their hearts for the sins they would have to commit. Or, we may have our own disabilities that affect our nerve system. Also, it may partially be due to the way this story is written, since I find myself correcting your grammatical mistakes in my head for the most part, and it’s just not written so effectively as to provoke much emotion. It’s actually quite unfortunate, since the plot actually has a lot of potential. I've seen stories that are written really well, and they make me, a patient with the disability to feel much emotion, truly sad. I'd like to request of you to stop stereotyping people as they may have their own reasons as to why they can't feel bad while reading this story, since I do feel rather upset after reading your comment and being reminded that people are judging us for an illness that we are born with. This does not necessarily make us bad people. After all, it is absurd to divide people into good and bad. People are either charming or tedious.

LOVED IT! It had such a great plot. The ending went a little fast though. But it was still such a good story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next :)

I can't you! _ I've tried all sorts of ways to type in your URL, but I just can't find it! DX

it's been one year, but will you update this?

Last one was me I forgot my name .

I normally don't read this pairing but this made me love them .

I feel like Izaya parents relationship was really cute up until he killed her ;.;

You made me cry I love Hio ;.;

I normally dont like OC's but Hio is the best OC ever I love him :3 and the Shizaya is so cute .

I just finished your story all I got to say it was amazing! Wait no that's like a major understatement... It's like magically FaBuLoUs! I don't care if there were spelling mistakes and shit like that at least there was an ending while other writers don't update at all! The plot also covers it up cause its sooo AwEsOmE! I also found your story with humor XD there was not chapter that didn't make me laugh or squeal! I wish u luck in your future of fanfiction :D

WAAHAAHAHAHAHAAA IT WAS GREEAATTT
I lurved it :3 I don't realy care that it wasn't up before my birthday, at least it's done yea? YEAAA
Anyways it's so beautiful *sparklyeyes* I need you to write more stories mmkay? NEED being the keyword
yeyyyy

HAHAHAHAHA! "What? Are we not calling each others names?" BEST LINE EVER! I woke up my family from laughing too loud ahhhhhhh. Author is wonderful for creating this golden story

Oh thank goodness thank goodness they can be together again! And the shizuo x Akabayashi bromance heheheh! Now hio-chan just needs his prince charming(a.k.a. Iza-chin!) (_)

Nooooooooooo! HIO CAN't BE?! *sobs in an uncontrollable mess* why is 17 so painful

Cliff Hanger! Izaya's dad is one nasty guy and his poor poor momma (T_T) Hio's kiddy crush on Izaya is soooo cute! Especially how he crashed their little slumber party!