My favorite part of this story is the sub plot of you and Landon. Get their number already ;)

Please tag your story right. It would let people that specifically research for OC to actually find it. And allow people that don't like it to not have a lot of irrelevant suggestion that blur their research...

Brilliant. This is despairingly beautiful. An ideal, blanketed by the falsity of expectations.

Love, love, LOVE this story and I'm excited beyond belief that there are sequels to be read! : )

actually since he was king when he vanished all he would need is the odinspear to prove who he is since it went with him... Then a few arguments here and there and wala back on the throne.

OMG YES! YES! YES! The throne room scene has always been the biggest fantasy. SO HAPPY YOU WROTE THIS! loving the story!

So excited to read this! Love the "Tom" bit! Ah!

i really enjoyed reading this a lot. looking forward to reading the sequel soon.

Love it so far, but one tiny correction. Vibranium is what Captain America's shield is made of so Vibranium is a metal (mineral?) not an element. They didn't officially name the new element in IM2 but I think the generally accepted name is Starkadium (Stark Palladium Starkadium).

Hi there, I like your story so far but I just have to comment on this chapter. Did Loki use magic or some sort of persuasion when he was *ahem* with Barbara? Because he raped her last chapter, which frightened her so badly that she was shaking even when he wasn't in the room. In fact, she commented on how painful it was for her and how upset she was.
Now, I might understand how Loki would want to assert his dominance in an archaic way, but it just seems a bit far fetched that Barbara would be gung-ho about doing the deed with Loki just because he promises her that she will like it this time. Even more far fetched that she would call him amazing afterward...you would think that without magical interference she would at least feel a little conflicted about finding pleasure in her rapist.
Like I said before, I really like your story, and I only offer constructive criticism because we are all on here to get feedback and become better writers. :)

I was impressed by this story... Wonderful writing :)
The only thing you missed (and could've added more forced smut) is that Loki didn't really get 'caught'. Sure the Avengers picked him up in Germany, but when Thor and Iron Man fought no one was watching the Mischief-maker, so he generated a doppelganger (of you watch Avengers again look closely went Barton and his team of infiltrators board the Heli-carrier... The first one kicks the vent open no problem then jumps down like it's nothing while everyone else had to repel down... Only a superhuman can do that and walk away with no broken ankles. ;) )
I really enjoyed your writing style in this as well.
Keep up the good writing :)

This is my fifth time reading it and I Love It! I have my own fan fiction but haven't posted it. It's about a girl named Lia who has been told her whole life her father was Thor. Well the upcoming events will make her regret she ever thought he was telling the truth. For she will have an encounter with a certain god of mischief and sometimes the truth hurts. When I get it posted I encourage you to read it. Anyway greAt story can't wait to read it again.

I love this fan fiction it's my fav of all time with loki. I am a big fan girl for him and you brought out a different and amazing side of his I never would have thought of. I thought of a good song for Barbara it's Addicted by Kelly Clarkson. I think it fits her perfectly. Anyway love the chapter and keep up the good work!

The BEST Loki/OC story I've ever had the honour and luck to read! Oh, just as Barbara became a part of darkness, I became a creature of the darkest shadows... ;) I can want nothing more than for Barbara to finally become a villain, to finally deserve Loki! LOVE YOU! :D

Tears stung in my eyes for this beautifully cruel chapter!