Beautiful

Beautiful, although you're missing quite a few commas. still love it

Great fic! Well written!

What a perfectly complete one-shot. Every kiss was so lovely and heartfelt.

Wow,well done.I wasn't sure I would like to read a romantic fic about these two,I saw them more like father/daughter than lovers,but your story is really beautiful! Well done.

Absolutely perfect. You are incredibly talented :-)

Love.

amazing. i absolutely loved it

I really enjoyed this. You made their relationship work in the bounds of what we've seen in the movie. It was very believable, and I quite liked it!
Good job!

Okay i never thought about this ship during the movie. But, by the power of this fic i'm on board! Amazing job.

The fourth one is the best. So romantic!

..I am at a loss for words. Absolutely amazing. The second and third kisses in particular. Just how I imagine they would have been like together.

When I saw the notification that you posted another story I was like "oh noooo...this is not good for my studying right now."

I am completely and utterly speechless right now. I didn't see the DKR, equally because I didn't have time and because DK has set my expectations too high for the final movie. But after reading this I want to see the movie, so bravo! You've made DKR another $10 xPP
Anyways. Amazing writing and imagery as always. I cannot wait for your next post :)

Simply beautiful. Lovely, sweet, wonderful writing.

This was absolutely perfect- I loved the way each of the kisses happened, the story behind each. It was completely true to both Talia and Bane's characters. Great job!