It may too much to hope that this will be continued seven years later... but I will anyway. After reading Salvation recently I was eager for more of your Aki/Hein stories. I've been on the last week soaking up whats here of the pairing since rewatching the movie recently and I have not been disappointed. (Just that there is so few of hem out there! Maybe I'll have to write some!) I'll have to leave a review for Salvation as well, so I hope you are still around this site to read that I throughly enjoyed your stories :)

Cheers,

Misty

Great fic! I've read it before, but I decided to read it again just recently. I've noticed that you haven't updated it since 2003 and it's now 2008. And it does say, "to be continued" at the end of this chapter. I'm wondering, will you update this again someday? Or have you given up on it? I understand that you're probably busy and you have a life

Oohh... why don't you finish this amazing story? *cry*

Bing! Goodbye cannon. Hello beautiful, sweet, sweet fandom... _

Don't mind me. Labs have driven me mad. It's a wonder I still remembered to check if any stories were updated. *mutter* Still. It's good y'know. As all your stuff is. _

Ouch. Burn. That last one had to hurt. Well written, as always, and well thought out. Characters are in character and that is always major points in my book (no pun intended). Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm betting Aki and Hein aren't going to be exactly thrilled with each other after this...

Awww... They're protecting him! How *Cute!*

I don't know if you're still working on this, but I'm dropping a line anyway in hopes that you'll eventually continue. This is absolutely wonderful. There are so many little details and quirks in the characters thoughts that you get just right, making the world of the movie seem incredibly real. Everytime i read through a character's train of thought, I think "Oh, right! So-and-so *would* think that, because such-and-such happened in the movie." It's clear that you have a *fine* attention to detail, as well as a skill for getting into characters' heads. I hope you realize that it doesn't go unnoticed! )

::gets down on knees, praying for more::

Wow, now this looks like it might span into something great. I can't wait for the next chapter. In fact I think I'm looking forward to the next instillation of this story as much as you out of the ashes on (even if this one doesn't have Neil in it, I love Neil, Hein's my second favorite character). But hey! Maybe later on you'll even have Neil in this chapter, and he might even live! Cool!

Ah... there's mention of the leash again.

Honestly, I don't see much plagiarization here. Even then... what're ya goin'a do? Sue yourself?

Uhm. Aren't you kinda allowed to plagiarise "Salvation"? It is yours after all! _

And I must say; miaow. Let's see how many people can get annoyed at someone else in three paragraphs! *grins* But I understand, of course. I'm just not lucid right now.

Tis muchly good y'know. *nods* Muchly, muchly. Damnit, "LH" shoulda been like this. *scowls at her own inability* Still. Can't wait for your computer to fix itself so yooou caaaan doooo mooooooore. *is finally restrained by the muses and wanders off in a little insomniacy haze*

Wow, girl, the creative mind that you have!

And, once again, your attention to detail both in characterization and the technical aspect of the story is amazing! I absolutely can't wait to read more of this!

Hee hee, looks like Hein is definitely NOT a morning person. 8)

More! Please? This is excellent work so far, I can't wait to see where you're heading with this. Anyway, please write more, the suspense is getting painful! _

*Squirms a little, then settles down*

More please.

Awesome! I'm very impressed. Your attention to detail not only in the action and plot but also in character mindset and mannerisms is truly excellent! I can't wait to see how this turns out! Bravo!