This is very cool! I like how it wasn't the usual meet and great, but played out in a more unconventional manner thats ending in them meeting each other. Poor Rochelle. I hope she will be okay! I am not sure why but I got like evil vibes from Nick LOL it's weird I know, but we'll see! I am loving the interaction!

Wow, what an amazing cliffhanger you did here! Good job, and ah gotta love Ellis so much! This jut got more interesting!

Wow, I am very surprised that you took out Bill and Francis all within the second chapter, let alone 3 out of the original 4. I see now why the focus was on Zoey LOL I am really eager to see what happens next!

Very great chapter- it coincides with an apparently common feeling of Louis being meh but that is ok! I feel Zoey may get more focus than the others, but really, I like all of them! Great beginning and I cannot wait to read more

Hello I was wondering if you would be open to seeing a short trailer of sorts that I am making using source filmmaker and the short is of this story, I am almost done with it, it only shows a few things but it looks great so far. Please respond :)

Do it! Like you just have to c:

Why does every NEARLY time I read a story,Louis dies? He is my third favorite character
becausae it is funny how he says Pills.

I now see I have bad luck.

Original story with neat twists, held my attention throughout - excellent job.

I agree with the earlier reviewer who said this work begs to be expanded and developed: a rock-solid core is there all right.

Nice. C:

This was beautiful! I freakin cried throughout the story! I would love to see a sequel!

Sequel!

Yes I do believe I get the reference to these four men.

I would love some sort of epilogue to this one. You could fastforward a few years and briefly describe how they end up. Its not even necessary to explain how they got from the end of this chapter to the point you would describe in the epilogue. The things in between we can always guess, sometimes things shouldn't be explained :-)

Loved the story.

What a great yarn! :-) All you need is a good editor plus a couple of contributing writers (to help fill the gaps and lengthen the story) and youve got a short novel that I would buy and read over and over!

wow. just wow. this story is the best fanfiction of left 4 dead i have ever read, maybe even the best story on this entire website! i can't wait until you write another chapter.

It's purely amazing! You should be an author when you're older 3 I hope you take it into consideration. I would buy your books :)