There is not enough Jackson and Lydia stuff around! This story is amazing

AWESOME

Wow. I don't know what to say. It's not really LJ, more AU, but I kinda have this sadistic love for this story. I don't know what's wrong with me. Seeing the abuse and hurt from Lydia shouldn't make me grin. But I can't control myself. This weird, sick, twisted take on this kinda just...I don't know. I like it. lol

Ah I love this!
I've only seen a couple of episodes, but this is just perfect, their relationship and gah.
Its so destructive and the writing is just perfect.
Well done.

Please continue you captured them perfectly and got me wanting more. great job!

Pleaseeee continue! I love this story so much!

Loved it! For only seeing the pilot you did an amazing job :)

That was good, I was just expecting a nicer ending, but other than that the story was great.

I don't know what to think of that story because I ship Jydia so hard but to be honest I kinda liked it. Your characterization is great because Jackson and Lydia act the same as in the show. And I love your writing style. Really great story.

ok well just omg right now

my OTP gives me so many heartbreaking feels ugh

BRB FLIPPING THE ACTUAL FUCK OUT.

I legit thought I was the ONLY one who had this soft spot for these two. They are destructive, mean, and tragic - I LOVE IT.

So, thank you for writing this, first of all. It was spectacular.

You actually captured Jackson perfectly. If I ever write him, this is how I would do it. He is the perfect mixture of asshole and boy. Because, honestly, this guy has problems at home and everything is never what it's made out to be. You captured that so well.

And Lydia. Her vulnerability almost killed me. God, she just want to be LIKED, popular - that's all. But she ends up in this tumultuous relationship with a pretty boy who treats her like shit, but she cannot walk away for good.

Their relationship is tragic and beautiful at the same time. I commend you for pulling that off. Also, the line about the deal with the devil was incredible. As was the entire section about losing her virginity. Seriously, I had tears in my eyes.

All in all, this was flawless and you did an amazing job!

-a.

You beautiful human being. I love this! The last line sucker punched me. I love how " she made a deal with the devil "