Phew this was hot as hell! And the intimacy was so well written, can't tell that this is your first time writing smut at all! Well done!

Bloody hell! That was HOT! Amazing;)))))))

'''Well, this changes things..."" Damn right it does!

:)

OMG SOOO GOOOOOD

dude this is so sexy! give me more

YESSS! This was sososo good

ffvokg,lbvokbl, lnbk,

It was AWESOME ! I can't believe it's your first smut, it was soooo gooood to read (and I'm very happy not being the only one whom fingers don't seem to work and to use water :p)
And I love the idea of Lily stressed out who relaxes alone and not by jumping on ... "Oh, James is here, why not have sex with him after all he's good looking and in love with me" I mean you explains why and how she relaxes, these are good bases, you don't writte like 'well, Lily was masturbating on the bathroom and the forget to close the door'
It's not clear at all but I'm trying to say your fic is the best smut (or close to be) I've ever read ! I LOVE YOU.
Kisses, keep writting because obviously WOW and ... Voilà ;)

awesome! stories like these provide relaxation for stressed authors , stressed because of decency.

...holy poo, that was brilliant

I love it!

really good...wish hestia joins james and Lily.

Woah, steamy action there o.o

Really? Water tub? I would've never thought about it! XD

Sequel?