Good god that was intense!

Your writing is, just, it's ... forgive me, but I don't know that I'll ever be able to put into words just how phenomenal I find your writing to be! You string words together beautifully and the end result has me swooning. Quite literally. And as silly as it makes me feel to admit this, I'm rather enamored with your skill.

You write with such elegance and I so enjoy your choice of diction. It's impossible not to appreciate the honesty of the emotions you've captured in every line. How you excel in translating feelings into words without sacrificing any of their potency, it leaves me envious. I truly hope this is making even the tiniest bit of sense (my attempt to express exactly why you have me so impressed), as I have a tendency to ramble :)

Oh, and then there's this. You've written something so incredibly arousing, something I cannot help but see as clearly in my mind as if I were watching it unfold right in front of me, and you've done this without cheapening a single passionate moment with crass or crude descriptions. I do believe there's a time and place for those elements as well, but for your achievement with this particular story, I must applaud you!

Your talent is explicit, your writing poetic, and I admire every word.

See, I'm working on conciseness. Kind of ... :)

Well, there you have it. You've undoubtedly done a number on me. Thank you very much for writing and sharing your work!

I absolutely love this story, I find myself always returning back to it! It's beautifully written, and their emotions are believable. There's just the right amount of angst, with a whole lot of love. Well done!

Wow. That is without a doubt the most astonishing sex scene I ever read. Fancy writing some more?!

Great little ficlet, loved it, thanks :) x

Two thumbs up.

Wow.

I never knew that a fic like this, that would normally just be a quick smut piece by superficial assumptions, could have so much substance and be stretched as long as this was. The length was perfect and the pacing was excellent. It was sexy - very much so - without being crass (the bad kind of crass, I mean) so well done to you, because that is actually very difficult to do as a writer, as I'm sure you know. Anyways, thank you.

Hot...very hot! I love first time stories, a slow built into fireworks *THUD*

Awesome, really good story. So happy to see Myka being the seducer. :)

I loved this and I loved watching Myka move outside her comfort zone because she wants this so much. Great fic :)

I know this is kind of an odd thing to say about veritable porn, but damn. You are one good writer. This is the kind of writing I love, where every sentence seems to come to life, and you kind of stop to admire each paragraph as you read it. Keep up the really freakin' amazing work.

-a Bering and Wells fangirl

Very nice! I'll put this at the top list of my favorite PWP's (;

Absolute perfection. Many times authors lose the characters' personalities and "voice" when they sexy times. You did not. These are the same two characters we have come to love, doing exactly what we all want the to be doing. Incredibly passionate and realistic...well done. Definitely needs a "do not read at work" disclaimer!

Holy shit. And yes, that is my way of asking you to marry me.

All I can say is WOW!