Please continue this, its so good !

With L.A. Noire being re-released, I decided to delve into it's series of fanfictions again.
I found yours and fell in love, it is just such a shame it was never continued.
You have everyone perfectly in character, even Roy, who is the hardest to maintain character with, in my opinion anyway.
I'll be keeping this in my favourites, just in case you decide to update (unlikely, but I live in hope) or so I can read over this brilliant story again.
Thank you for writing it.
~ Starfire x

This was a very intriguing fanfic and cole and roy were very well characterized. If you ever decide to continue this, even after all these years, i'll be glad to read it. :)

This sounds very promising story. Can't wait the next chapter. Personally i just lover Roy, you made him just as sarcastic and charming as he is.

Ahhh, please tell me you're planning to write more! *puppy dog eyes* I think you've really nailed them and you set it up for some really awesome things to happen. :)

I'm loving this :)

I absolutely love this fic so far and I hope you haven't forgotten about it and will continue to update (soon *_*)! I only just finished LA Noire and am sad to see the fandom's so small, but it does have some jewels. Your fic is one of my 4 faves (amongst "For Life" and Lady Rohan's stuff xD)! I think you got the characterization down to the dot, I love the voices and dialogue, I can just imagine them. And I agree that Roy and Cole are hard to write! I wouldn't feel comfortable doing it, especially with not being a native speaker.
I also appreciate the little details, like mentioning that Roy also has a .45 caliber (the wiki even emphasizes he's the only one of the partners to have one) or that he scolds Cole for not staying in cover yet being reckless himself. I love little stuff about the characters like that and am glad to see you put them into your fic. xD Everything seems so canon and their interactions are really interesting to read. I wonder what Roy did during his day off... :p

Absolutely love how you've captured the characters. Every time you mention Roy's grin I can see it in my mind, and cannot help but smile. You really have got every little detail in this story. Brilliant read! Thank you (:

I'm so happy I stumbled across this story! Not only do you make their relationship believable (it's spot on, my friend), but I have to say that I adore your writing style! Seriously, the way you describe everything is so much more enjoyable than what I typically read. Once again, fabulous job! Eagerly awaiting the next update!

Hi !
(Sorry in advance for my bad English v.v)
I've had already read your fic (one of the rare fic in this fandom) some time ago and when I wanted to re-read it, I realized you've just updated it ! Like I didn't think the last time to leave a review I'm doing it now. Well, all I can say it's that it's well-written, interesting and I really love how you make evolve the relationship between Roy and Cole. Me, who had only finished the game last week because I didn't want to see Cole die, I really like your fanfic !
Anyway, thanks again for the new chapter and I'm really eager to read the next one ! :D

Wow, you have no idea how happy this update made me. I have been re-reading this again and again even though it's unfinished and now that you're actually continuing it.. You just made my day. Thank you.

I adore the way you write the interacting between Roy and Cole. It seems so in-character and believable that it could be straight from the game itself. I also really like how you write all these tiny details and characters' gestures. It makes the story so lifelike. I'm really looking forward the next chapter!

This totally made my day! The interaction between Roy and Cole is so perfect in this story. All that tension (and sexual frustration am I right?) is very written well and the words flow effortlessly. It's such a pleasure to read! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you so much for the update! :)

This story is amazing, please update soon!

Brilliant

oh im so giddy im ao glad you updated haha i almost totally forgot bout this story its getting really good i cant wait for more